Reflections
The eyes have it.20 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Trish, This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Mirror poem writing prompt contest. You used very good heart felt words that are so full of truth. Perfect imagery. May God bless you and good wishes in the contest. love, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Trish, This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Mirror poem writing prompt contest. You used very good heart felt words that are so full of truth. Perfect imagery. May God bless you and good wishes in the contest. love, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review. I came in 3rd in the contest, which is alright with me! I appreciate your reading my poem.
Comment from Pantygynt
Metrically and syllabically free an yet set out in quatrains with a rhyme scheme following an abcb pattern, the piece feels as if it has a stronger rhythm than is the case, consequently it flows well and is easily read aloud.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Metrically and syllabically free an yet set out in quatrains with a rhyme scheme following an abcb pattern, the piece feels as if it has a stronger rhythm than is the case, consequently it flows well and is easily read aloud.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Though you have exposed some positive view and changes, I find you have negative aspects of changes if any, would not favour complete solution to the wrongful practices by politicians and others of posing human actions ensuring inhuman activities in violation of human rights in terms of colours; mirror does reflect truths but lookers thoughts matter; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Though you have exposed some positive view and changes, I find you have negative aspects of changes if any, would not favour complete solution to the wrongful practices by politicians and others of posing human actions ensuring inhuman activities in violation of human rights in terms of colours; mirror does reflect truths but lookers thoughts matter; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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You have a good point...however, I prefer to think positive in that I can make a change in the world. Thank you so much for reading my poem. It's always appreciated.
Comment from JJ22
I really enjoyed reading this poem! What I like most about it, is that you have cleverly drawn a connection between the current sociopolitical climate/ Black Lives Matter and the writing prompt, and delivered your verse in a way that is emotional and relatable to readers. I also really like how the first verse transitions seamlessly into the next ("missing pieces that my heart once enshrined" and "missing is the faith in my fellow man"). I think it would be cool to end/ begin all lines in this way (although I also appreciate that this method could be somewhat limiting).
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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I really enjoyed reading this poem! What I like most about it, is that you have cleverly drawn a connection between the current sociopolitical climate/ Black Lives Matter and the writing prompt, and delivered your verse in a way that is emotional and relatable to readers. I also really like how the first verse transitions seamlessly into the next ("missing pieces that my heart once enshrined" and "missing is the faith in my fellow man"). I think it would be cool to end/ begin all lines in this way (although I also appreciate that this method could be somewhat limiting).
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading and re viewing my poem. :)
Comment from Mohamed 1
It's a good and honest talk I just want want to add that there is a lot of difference between we want to change and we can actually Chane and the most confusing thing here is do people actually aware of what they want to change or not
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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It's a good and honest talk I just want want to add that there is a lot of difference between we want to change and we can actually Chane and the most confusing thing here is do people actually aware of what they want to change or not
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Karen Estep
I see reality in your writing. Truth. Your use of rhyme was very good, and I felt emotionally getting involved in your poem. Your choice of graphics enhanced your story.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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I see reality in your writing. Truth. Your use of rhyme was very good, and I felt emotionally getting involved in your poem. Your choice of graphics enhanced your story.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for this nice review...much appreciated.
Comment from sherrygreywolf
You have written a very nice poem, both thought-provoking and timely. I did see one thing that needs changing -
"violence reins (should be reigns) now"
Other than that, good job!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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You have written a very nice poem, both thought-provoking and timely. I did see one thing that needs changing -
"violence reins (should be reigns) now"
Other than that, good job!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2020
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You have an awesome writing name :)...Thank you for reading and for this great review.
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Thank you. I chose the name to honor my lost wolf-cross, Kimba.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Outstanding poem and it's perfect for the contest entry. You adhered to the roles and I wish you luck on your work;-)
The flow would flow better if you said
("That these troubled days will remain, as we persevere")
Thank you for sharing and God bless;-)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Outstanding poem and it's perfect for the contest entry. You adhered to the roles and I wish you luck on your work;-)
The flow would flow better if you said
("That these troubled days will remain, as we persevere")
Thank you for sharing and God bless;-)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you for such a nice review and six star rating. It made my day! :)
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It's certainly well deserved, my friend;-)
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
OMG! how intense and creative tis this piece. And the artwork is off the rector scale with fiery excitement. The words and the artwork make a very powerful duo presentation and both make an amazing point. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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OMG! how intense and creative tis this piece. And the artwork is off the rector scale with fiery excitement. The words and the artwork make a very powerful duo presentation and both make an amazing point. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Thank you for this great response to my poem..I'm so happy you liked it.
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yess I did
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yes enjoyable read
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Looking in the mirror and seeing not only the outer shell, but also the inner man is not always easy, One has to dig down deep and view honestly. Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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Looking in the mirror and seeing not only the outer shell, but also the inner man is not always easy, One has to dig down deep and view honestly. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2020
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That is true. Thanks so much for reading my poem.
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You're quite welcome.
