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Reactions contest entry
2 total reviews
Comment from
January L'Angelle
This is a very good reactions story. I like the premise of the story and the way you took me on a short journey. I enjoyed the ending, it worked well. The writing was strong. Well done. January L.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Comment from
Bobby Cunningham
I really enjoyed how you emphasize family unity and love. When people love someone they feel their experiences with them. Now when a woman gets pregnant her and her husband will say "we're pregnant" when someone goes to prison they say your family is doing your time with you. In this case when a loved one gets sick you feel sick as well. True love means true empathy. That's what I love about this story. Very nice writing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
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