Lathe of Heaven
a 5-7-5 review10 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the
5-7-5 Movie Review writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. You summarized the movie pretty well. Good job.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice entry for the
5-7-5 Movie Review writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. You summarized the movie pretty well. Good job.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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Thanks, Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a frightening scenario and the film is inventive and your 5-7-5 brings back the story of this film and its popularity at the time, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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This is a frightening scenario and the film is inventive and your 5-7-5 brings back the story of this film and its popularity at the time, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The crème of the film is so vividly expressed in this 5-7-5 poem movie review, as the great author's words come true; well said and well done; enjoyed the read. Good luck. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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The crème of the film is so vividly expressed in this 5-7-5 poem movie review, as the great author's words come true; well said and well done; enjoyed the read. Good luck. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written 5-7-5 movie review you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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This is a very interesting and well written 5-7-5 movie review you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky
Dear author,
Thanks for a succinct review that really tells me the main idea--which is humorous. I'm not at all familiar with the movie, so maybe you've also given me a tip on what's worth viewing!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Dear author,
Thanks for a succinct review that really tells me the main idea--which is humorous. I'm not at all familiar with the movie, so maybe you've also given me a tip on what's worth viewing!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks, Roberta, for giving this a look.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 movie review about the bad dreams that George Irr tries to fix in his dreams but it never works out and get even weirder when he fails to change his dreams for the better.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 movie review about the bad dreams that George Irr tries to fix in his dreams but it never works out and get even weirder when he fails to change his dreams for the better.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks, Sandra
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ups, here comes the horror - tries to fix us in his sleep,
things keep going wrong.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Ups, here comes the horror - tries to fix us in his sleep,
things keep going wrong.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks, Iza
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I'm not sure, but probably the scenarios from the last few days will create a movie.
Although the police are being analyzed, we do need them. Do you think the schools would be safe if we didn't have the law enforcement? There is way too much drugs out there.
To lie is not the answer, but if we can trust again, that would solve many of the issues.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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I'm not sure, but probably the scenarios from the last few days will create a movie.
Although the police are being analyzed, we do need them. Do you think the schools would be safe if we didn't have the law enforcement? There is way too much drugs out there.
To lie is not the answer, but if we can trust again, that would solve many of the issues.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem
about the movie by giving
the basic idea in line one;
then follow it with what he
tries, and then all the complications.
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem
about the movie by giving
the basic idea in line one;
then follow it with what he
tries, and then all the complications.
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Pam
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You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the movie review contest.
Difficult to say much in seventeen syllables, but you've managed to
convey the gist of the story.
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the movie review contest.
Difficult to say much in seventeen syllables, but you've managed to
convey the gist of the story.
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Robert