Friends
Haiku5 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Friends are hard to find but keeping friends for good is rather harder; well said and well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing; good luck. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Friends are hard to find but keeping friends for good is rather harder; well said and well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing; good luck. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff
Comment from royowen
What a good post, in so many ways this is a marvellous post considering the climate of things, most obviously ambiguous as this shorts should bem and deftly written, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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What a good post, in so many ways this is a marvellous post considering the climate of things, most obviously ambiguous as this shorts should bem and deftly written, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff
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Bless you
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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This is a very nice and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review Teri. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff
Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky
Possibilities for friendship are everywhere.
A stranger is a friend you haven't yet met.
To have a friend, be a friend.
The platitudes apply.
A platitude is a truth you haven't yet verified.
Look around you.
Like Rumi says: Wake up!
Do you count ' dwindling' as three syllables, by the way??
I put those syllables at two.
Or is that a subtle way to allude to the eroded nature of 'dwindling' dropping one syllable even as we speak??
See MLA, APA & Chicago Manual of Style...
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Possibilities for friendship are everywhere.
A stranger is a friend you haven't yet met.
To have a friend, be a friend.
The platitudes apply.
A platitude is a truth you haven't yet verified.
Look around you.
Like Rumi says: Wake up!
Do you count ' dwindling' as three syllables, by the way??
I put those syllables at two.
Or is that a subtle way to allude to the eroded nature of 'dwindling' dropping one syllable even as we speak??
See MLA, APA & Chicago Manual of Style...
Comment Written 09-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review and the correction to dwindling which I have now altered.
Geoff
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thank you
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem speaks a truth in today's lockdown isolation days. It's hard to retain friendships, so they are dwindling. Everyone is afraid of germs.
I think long after the pandemic is over, there will still be a great fear of the killing germs, so it will continue as germ warfare disrupting everything. My opinion.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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This poem speaks a truth in today's lockdown isolation days. It's hard to retain friendships, so they are dwindling. Everyone is afraid of germs.
I think long after the pandemic is over, there will still be a great fear of the killing germs, so it will continue as germ warfare disrupting everything. My opinion.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review. I think what you're saying has a lot of merit
Geoff
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You are very welcome.