Tears
They are but the beginning...29 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image,
presentation, and
shape of your poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and imagery.
-You make some good points
about tears; they cannot literally
remove pain, but they can ease it,
depending on the person.
-I like the ending with "sunshine's
warmth" and "life's promise."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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-Very nice image,
presentation, and
shape of your poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and imagery.
-You make some good points
about tears; they cannot literally
remove pain, but they can ease it,
depending on the person.
-I like the ending with "sunshine's
warmth" and "life's promise."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
On of the most exquisite etheree poems I have had the pleasure to read. Your words speak volumes and resonate deeply with this reader...
Best wishes!
Diane
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
On of the most exquisite etheree poems I have had the pleasure to read. Your words speak volumes and resonate deeply with this reader...
Best wishes!
Diane
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for the wonderful stars, Beautiful Lady! YOU are bright spot in the big picture of things - thank you for that!! Take care up there!
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Dry those tears, ma'am.
They do shit for your make-up, and the world needs to see your beautiful face and smile!
diane
Comment from June Sargent
A lovely etheree that offers hope that after the rain, the sun will shine again. From the ashes love will rise again like the Phoenix. But first, the tests...
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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A lovely etheree that offers hope that after the rain, the sun will shine again. From the ashes love will rise again like the Phoenix. But first, the tests...
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, June - always so good to hear from you. Not sure I want anything to do with an intimate love anymore... :) :)
Comment from zanya
This is a coherent Etheree exploring the philosophy of tears and the role they play in our human lives -the sentiments here are profound 'wash away/love's ashes on a scorched heart '
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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This is a coherent Etheree exploring the philosophy of tears and the role they play in our human lives -the sentiments here are profound 'wash away/love's ashes on a scorched heart '
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
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Such a lovely review, Zanya - thank you! Those stars are a wonderful start to the week over here!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, give hope, are descriptive and creative.
The words this author uses defines a beautiful way that tears can comfort
us and lead us to being hopeful once again. Have a good week!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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The author's words are engaging, give hope, are descriptive and creative.
The words this author uses defines a beautiful way that tears can comfort
us and lead us to being hopeful once again. Have a good week!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Harmony - sending sunshine for your week ahead!
Comment from roof35
This is beautifully worded and beautifully presented. The picture pairs nicely with your words. You followed the rules and said a lot in a few words. It is well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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This is beautifully worded and beautifully presented. The picture pairs nicely with your words. You followed the rules and said a lot in a few words. It is well done.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sefiros
I like the structure, but I've always seen tears as a kind of cleansing act - cry out the pain and feel better (at least to all the romantic comedies my mother watches). But your terms work as well. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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I like the structure, but I've always seen tears as a kind of cleansing act - cry out the pain and feel better (at least to all the romantic comedies my mother watches). But your terms work as well. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Ogden
There is wisdom in your optimistic Etheree!
You also might have advised, "Don't cry over spilt milk." (I think there are some other appropriate adages.)
Ogden (Don)
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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There is wisdom in your optimistic Etheree!
You also might have advised, "Don't cry over spilt milk." (I think there are some other appropriate adages.)
Ogden (Don)
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Naaah... cryin's been good... just glad it's done. Thank you for your review, Don.
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You're very welcome.
If you're satisfied, so am I. :)
Don
Comment from Darlene Franklin
In fact, tears may water the new day's happiness by washing away the first rush of sadness. Tears are often healthy things. Well done with your etheree.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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In fact, tears may water the new day's happiness by washing away the first rush of sadness. Tears are often healthy things. Well done with your etheree.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
