She Bounds Upward Like a Dolpin
My love affair following a prison break7 total reviews
Comment from Tsukuyomi969
This was so nice to read. My last dog was upwards of twenty years ago and I still tear up when I think of him. I'm so glad you were able to experience that special bond. Good luck in the contest. Cheers.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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This was so nice to read. My last dog was upwards of twenty years ago and I still tear up when I think of him. I'm so glad you were able to experience that special bond. Good luck in the contest. Cheers.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks for sharing your experience, Tsu.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Looking at the picture yuou choose it reminds me that I have a precious pet exactly like that, that I rescued from a family that got divorced and each of them was seeing the puppy as the enemy. Unfortunately a few month later somebody broke into my yard and stole her. She was one of the best puppy I had. Now going back to your story I really like this passage, because it brings a different perspective in how we see the world around us. "She leaps into the sea of grasses, disappears, and then suddenly bounds upward like a dolphin arcing out of her salty waters.
' Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Looking at the picture yuou choose it reminds me that I have a precious pet exactly like that, that I rescued from a family that got divorced and each of them was seeing the puppy as the enemy. Unfortunately a few month later somebody broke into my yard and stole her. She was one of the best puppy I had. Now going back to your story I really like this passage, because it brings a different perspective in how we see the world around us. "She leaps into the sea of grasses, disappears, and then suddenly bounds upward like a dolphin arcing out of her salty waters.
' Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks for sharing your experience, Tsu. ~~
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer with your descriptive writing you and your beloved have quite the hit and steamy love affair. Might I add, quite intimidating to my experience to my present love affair with my hubby. Lol. I love the story and it has a heartwarming feel to it. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Writer with your descriptive writing you and your beloved have quite the hit and steamy love affair. Might I add, quite intimidating to my experience to my present love affair with my hubby. Lol. I love the story and it has a heartwarming feel to it. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks for sharing your experience, Mary. May you bloom and grow with your Beloved!
Comment from TommyWrites
This is spendid! You kept me reading the whole time, and I really liked it!
My sister has a puppy, and he follows her around everywhere, and when your Beloved licks your face in the morning reminds me of my sister's puppy. Great job!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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This is spendid! You kept me reading the whole time, and I really liked it!
My sister has a puppy, and he follows her around everywhere, and when your Beloved licks your face in the morning reminds me of my sister's puppy. Great job!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks for sharing your sister's experience, Tommy. May you bloom and grow with your Beloved!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet. I gave you your third vote!
Your entry stood way out from the crowd ..
Your first two paragraphs are beautiful ..
your narrative captured my heart .. You had me fretting too and then so relieved when you said you pried the door open .. I screamed Yesss ..
What a traumatic ordeal .. I'm not surprised it took her months to put that terrible experience behind her ..
Yes they do get over excited ( like jelly beans) and squeal when they know its time for their walk ... their noses are stuck to the ground in the hope to sniff a new scent..
...leaps into the sea of grasses, then suddenly bounds upward like a dolphin ... loved this part too.
I wish you and your Bella many happy years to come.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Ciao mystery poet. I gave you your third vote!
Your entry stood way out from the crowd ..
Your first two paragraphs are beautiful ..
your narrative captured my heart .. You had me fretting too and then so relieved when you said you pried the door open .. I screamed Yesss ..
What a traumatic ordeal .. I'm not surprised it took her months to put that terrible experience behind her ..
Yes they do get over excited ( like jelly beans) and squeal when they know its time for their walk ... their noses are stuck to the ground in the hope to sniff a new scent..
...leaps into the sea of grasses, then suddenly bounds upward like a dolphin ... loved this part too.
I wish you and your Bella many happy years to come.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks for sharing your experience, tempest. May you bloom and grow with your Beloved!
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I just checked the poll..
..wish I could give you a helping paw ...
..vote again to move you up to second position by yourself .. ( smile) .
Take care
Ciao!
Comment from tfawcus
Great story of heroic rescue and the development of a lifelong friendship as a result. What a remarkable bond develops between man and dog with a bit of kindness.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Great story of heroic rescue and the development of a lifelong friendship as a result. What a remarkable bond develops between man and dog with a bit of kindness.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your kind and supportive words.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Foxina, what a darling name for a dog! I love how you told the story. Calling it a prison break, and how your dog;s trust had to grow from the mistreatment she had received, It;s obvious the affection is mutual.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Foxina, what a darling name for a dog! I love how you told the story. Calling it a prison break, and how your dog;s trust had to grow from the mistreatment she had received, It;s obvious the affection is mutual.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Maybe not entirely. Care to interview Foxina?
Thanks for your kind and supportive words.
