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2 total reviews
Comment from Flyaway1
Loved the piece. Smartly written and very descriptive of your surroundings.
Yes- what is reality? I often ponder.
I like the questioning aspect of the piece.
You are asking the reader- what do you think?
And finally, where does God fit into all of this?
I read it a couple times through.
The only comment I have is the green color does not make your thoughts pop.
This is just a co
Cosmetic suggestion.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Loved the piece. Smartly written and very descriptive of your surroundings.
Yes- what is reality? I often ponder.
I like the questioning aspect of the piece.
You are asking the reader- what do you think?
And finally, where does God fit into all of this?
I read it a couple times through.
The only comment I have is the green color does not make your thoughts pop.
This is just a co
Cosmetic suggestion.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from fluffnstuff
This is definitely one i will read over one more time. I like the different way you write. You have alot of heart i can tell. carry on and keep up the good work. Fluff
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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This is definitely one i will read over one more time. I like the different way you write. You have alot of heart i can tell. carry on and keep up the good work. Fluff
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2020
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Thanks Miss fluff and glad you decided to come aboard the Good ship lollipop of Ricky.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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