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Comment from Lucy de Welles
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Hah! Existentialism at its best!
Isn't it interesting how our perception of this topic continually changes with new experiences?
In the backdrop of unlimited possibilities in this universe, doing things over again the same way would most likely be impossible?
So, no worries, I tell myself :)
Yikes!
Lucy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thanks for your entertaining observations, Lucy! Cheers. LIZ
reply by Lucy de Welles on 29-Sep-2020
Comment from judiverse
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You are really early with this! Best of luck in the contest, ahead of time. This is so true. Although we think we would do things differently, very likely we'd end up doing the same things. Very attractive presentation with the black on green. judi

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Old contest--didn't win, never do. Cheers. LIZ
reply by judiverse on 28-Sep-2020
    I didn't notice the date of the contest. I rarely win but doesn't stop me from wasting my money and entering. judi
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL!! Oh, yeah, isn't that the truth! It's almost like we say the first part out loud so that people might THINK differently of our decision... but we pretty much know ourselves, don't we?! ;) :) A fun offering for the contest here, LIZ -- and has the ability to make folks do a bit of self-examination (if they actually read it carefully!)... ;) Best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    Hello Yvette! So glad you got it! Cheers. LIZ (Contest long over; didn't win, never do--nary so much as mention)
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Yes, most everyone can think of a few things they would like to go back and do over. NOT. Few would do anything different, even though they know better. As for me, I made more mistakes than anyone and was wilder than a choked duck, and if they asked if I would do anything different . . . I could only laugh. The only think I would do differently, is more of everything I did wrong! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Ric--you've got to post these delightful tidbits! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from BethShelby
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I''ve often thought if I could go back if I would do things differently and the answer is probably not. I would live it all much the same way, errors and all. I've made a lot of what could be considered mistakes, but I don't have a lot of regrets. Cool poem.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thanks Beth. I envy you re not having regrets. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from royowen
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That's always a difficult one, we simply can't go back, but it is an opportunity to do better, that's why we should never worry about yesterday, because fo us it doesn't exist, only an endless future, well done Liz, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Well said! Thanks for stopping by--I've paid you several visits too! Cheers. LIZ
reply by royowen on 21-Sep-2020
    Well done
Comment from AnnieDawn
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I like the way you have doubled back on yourself with this post. It is witty and clever. You have a way of doing this with most of what you write. I enjoyed this poem. Great job on this four-line poem.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you for your encouraging words Annie! As a "poet" I aspire to amateur status--I'm metaphorically challenged; hence hopelessly literal minded--symbolism and nature imagery are a stretch for me; thus I generally say my piece in plain words (and prefer to read such straightforward "poetry"). Cheers LIZ
Comment from lyenochka
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Your poem clearly shows us the conundrum of how often people which they could do things differently in the past and YET, they are the same people and are prone to be the same. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thanks Helen. I wrote this months ago and have been saving it--good thing I checked. (I'd already submitted one for the prior contest.) Cheers. LIZ