My Trusting Nature
My judgement is poor: I never see it coming.12 total reviews
Comment from Brad Bennett
Hi Lisa. Very nice (to hell with spellcheck) theme and visual to communicate right off where you were coming from. And you carried that message without digressing. Don't chuck those glasses, they can always be fixed. Maybe what's out there isn't always what it appears, but pink is better than another color I won't name.
Remember that song...if that's all there is my friend, then let's keep dancing...
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Hi Lisa. Very nice (to hell with spellcheck) theme and visual to communicate right off where you were coming from. And you carried that message without digressing. Don't chuck those glasses, they can always be fixed. Maybe what's out there isn't always what it appears, but pink is better than another color I won't name.
Remember that song...if that's all there is my friend, then let's keep dancing...
Comment Written 08-Jun-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece speaks to me. I too have been blind to people and been hurt and taken advantage of. Being kind and forgiving is a flaw yet a kindness of the heart.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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This piece speaks to me. I too have been blind to people and been hurt and taken advantage of. Being kind and forgiving is a flaw yet a kindness of the heart.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review. We softies get taken advantage of for sure, but better to care than be hard-natured. Our flaws can be our best qualities too.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Great entry for the I Am Not Perfect contest. It's good to know yourself and accept all of you. Your shortcoming turned out to be a gift. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Hello my friend
Great entry for the I Am Not Perfect contest. It's good to know yourself and accept all of you. Your shortcoming turned out to be a gift. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thank you! It's pretty cool when a flaw can be an asset as well.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
We all have flaws that we either work around, correct, or are still working on. Sometimes our flaws become our strength when we are not afraid of them. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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We all have flaws that we either work around, correct, or are still working on. Sometimes our flaws become our strength when we are not afraid of them. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your review. It's good when our flaws can work for us instead of against us.
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You're very welcome. You are so right.
Comment from Loren .
Okay, a poem that is a bit tongue-in-cheek and, a bit cheeky as well. That is if I'm understanding it. A revelation of self, yet not too self-deprecating. Your ability to rhyme and keep the theme is top drawer in my book, but alas, I'm no poet. But I did enjoy this, nonetheless. Loren
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Okay, a poem that is a bit tongue-in-cheek and, a bit cheeky as well. That is if I'm understanding it. A revelation of self, yet not too self-deprecating. Your ability to rhyme and keep the theme is top drawer in my book, but alas, I'm no poet. But I did enjoy this, nonetheless. Loren
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thanks for relating to the tone of this poem... tongue firmly in cheek.
Comment from Susan X Smith
I really liked this piece because I can relate to it. My mother was like you and she drummed it into me to be the same. Eventually I caught on. the picture was a great choice. The rhymes work well too.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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I really liked this piece because I can relate to it. My mother was like you and she drummed it into me to be the same. Eventually I caught on. the picture was a great choice. The rhymes work well too.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Super review! Thank you very much. I think some flaws can be good features as well.
Comment from CHANYA MASHENGU
A good understanding of oneself which is a challenge to many.
I liked the choice of broken glasses as your second eyes.
Perfect description of how the sight affects judgment.
well written grammar and easy to understand.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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A good understanding of oneself which is a challenge to many.
I liked the choice of broken glasses as your second eyes.
Perfect description of how the sight affects judgment.
well written grammar and easy to understand.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review!
Comment from QC Poet
This is a great rhyming poem about one's sight touchng on a few more blind spots most people dont realize about inattention, falling for traps and working through issues. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and Good Luck in the I am not perfect contest. Blessings
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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This is a great rhyming poem about one's sight touchng on a few more blind spots most people dont realize about inattention, falling for traps and working through issues. Thank you for Sharing your Gifts and Good Luck in the I am not perfect contest. Blessings
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review! Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Well, you may not be perfect, but you wrote a hell of a funny, good poem about your failing eyesight. Oh, sorry, it has been healed and you can see better now! But I hope you will always remain the nice, kind and easy believing, trusting woman you are.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Well, you may not be perfect, but you wrote a hell of a funny, good poem about your failing eyesight. Oh, sorry, it has been healed and you can see better now! But I hope you will always remain the nice, kind and easy believing, trusting woman you are.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you... I'll try to!
Sometimes a perceived flaw can actually be a good characteristic.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Aiona
Heh. I like this poem. It's funny and it rhymes, and is something that is quite relatable, for me, anyway, down to the prescriptive lenses. I didn't see any typos. It's a poem, so punctuation and grammar are stylistic. Thanks for posting this light-hearted piece.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Heh. I like this poem. It's funny and it rhymes, and is something that is quite relatable, for me, anyway, down to the prescriptive lenses. I didn't see any typos. It's a poem, so punctuation and grammar are stylistic. Thanks for posting this light-hearted piece.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thanks for your terrific review of my frivolity.
