Intertwined
Collaborative contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love in itself is poetry and we write about it and get lost in it and here love is personified in your poem into a tranquil journey, much enjoyed Valda, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Love in itself is poetry and we write about it and get lost in it and here love is personified in your poem into a tranquil journey, much enjoyed Valda, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the kind review, Dolly. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm sorry, but Valda seems to be going over my head. Maybe my internet search isn't giving me enough information. lol I'm glad you liked our little piece. Thank you again. Ron and Lynda
Comment from Gloria ....
Ah, the quatern is a perfect form choice for a collaborative poem.
You and LyndaS have created a work of art that shows the synergy between two poets.
Great job and best of luck to you two in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Ah, the quatern is a perfect form choice for a collaborative poem.
You and LyndaS have created a work of art that shows the synergy between two poets.
Great job and best of luck to you two in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Hey, Gloria. Hello. Thank you for this awesome review. Your gracious stars and good luck wishes are dearly appreciated. I'm glad you liked our little piece. Hope you have a great weekend. Ron and Lynda
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Intertwined", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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'Intertwined", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Duchess. I really appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked our little piece. Hope you have a great day. Ron and Lynda
Ron and Lynda,
you certainly deserved the fantastic review. Hopefully we'll all have a great day.
God bless,take care and keep sharing,
the Duchess
Comment from Mary Furlong
This is so beautifully written. Elegantly crafted so as to be crystal clear to the reader with images and words that have the effect of music - the music of our language . Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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This is so beautifully written. Elegantly crafted so as to be crystal clear to the reader with images and words that have the effect of music - the music of our language . Well done.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for the kind review, Mary. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked our little offering. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. Ron and Lynda
Comment from LyndaS
So how can I not give you a sixer on this? LOL! This sounds like something I would help write. Great job on the formatting of this and I loved the art you created. I wish us luck in the competition. And this is by far the strangest review I have ever written. ;-) LS
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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So how can I not give you a sixer on this? LOL! This sounds like something I would help write. Great job on the formatting of this and I loved the art you created. I wish us luck in the competition. And this is by far the strangest review I have ever written. ;-) LS
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Yeah, I figured you would like this one. Thank you so much, co-author. Ron
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear DS, I congratulate both you and Lynda for a truly lovely romantic poem.
I was intrigued by imagining how you both got on the same page to collaborate, but however you managed it, it was worth all the effort.
Thank You.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Dear DS, I congratulate both you and Lynda for a truly lovely romantic poem.
I was intrigued by imagining how you both got on the same page to collaborate, but however you managed it, it was worth all the effort.
Thank You.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for this great review and giant sixer, Suzanna. We actually talk on the phone a lot and that's how we pulled this one off. I dearly appreciate the kind words and generous rating. We're glad you liked our little piece. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and thank you again. Ron and Lynda
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative.
The poem flows and connects well. The author's descriptive words
were expressed well throughout this read. The artwork compliments
this poem well. Hope you had a great day!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative.
The poem flows and connects well. The author's descriptive words
were expressed well throughout this read. The artwork compliments
this poem well. Hope you had a great day!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Harmony. Glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful weekend. Ron and Lynda.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I really like quaterns. Your is excellently written, descriptive, and appealing. You have conveyed a moving message about the power of poetry to erase the miles between two poets.
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I really like quaterns. Your is excellently written, descriptive, and appealing. You have conveyed a moving message about the power of poetry to erase the miles between two poets.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Janice. Yes, I really love this poetry form, too. It's been awhile since I've done one of these. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked our little piece. Have a great day. Ron and Lynda
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the collaborative rhyming poem writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Great job! Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the collaborative rhyming poem writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Great job! Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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I really appreciate the gracious stars and kind review, Teri. I'm glad you liked our little piece. Thank you. Ron and Lynda
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I wish I have a ten, your collaboration is amazing:" So easily we rhyme in verse
through kindred souls that intertwine.
What precious gift this union brings
through poetry...Two hearts combine.
~"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest,
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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I wish I have a ten, your collaboration is amazing:" So easily we rhyme in verse
through kindred souls that intertwine.
What precious gift this union brings
through poetry...Two hearts combine.
~"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest,
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Iza, and the big 10 star offer. It really means a lot. I'm you liked our little entry. I hope you have a great weekend. Ron and Lynda
