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Where are all the Peacemakers?

The past week has shown the ugly belly of our nation

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line, the formatting and color scheme, and you strong and true message I like the image, too--reminds me of the crucifixion of Jesus which was wrong. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
    Jan, the cops actions sickens me to the very core, but the result of these punks sickens we even more and I am so P.O'ed at every politician for there hands in the pockets attititude, THIS IS NOT AMERICA!
Comment from richie b
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Your Senryu says it all. We keep going down this
ignorant and destructive road. We have to get it right
this time. Another senseless death and destruction
that only complicates and blinds the real issue.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
Richie b

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
    Bless you back dear friend, the cops actions sickens me to the very core, but the result of these punks sickens we even more and I am so P.O'ed at every politician for there hands in the pockets attititude, THIS IS NOT AMERICA!
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
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Good question. I hope they didn't all leave the planet with Martin Luther King, Jr. and JFK, both victims of violence themselves and promoters of non-violent resolutions. Where is another leader like this?? We need to bring God back into the equation. Blessed are the Peacemakers.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    AMEN! AMEN! AMEN! Lou, thanks for the six-stars to bring the attention to this pleading issue.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This political Senryu or Human Haiku speaks about futile attempt to interpret wrong act as right; well said, well done; I have enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you Best of luck in the contest. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Thank you, let's hope for peace and reconcilation!
Comment from royowen
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What an excellent entry in this contest, you've certainly got it right with the great post. It just goes to show, when there is simmering resentment in people, it manifests in a most serious way. Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Roy, than , we must pray and pray hard for a peaceful solution, enough is enough.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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The message you sent here is loud and clear: wrong act -destructive action, and is pretty painful when is intentional and makes you wonder who can win from this...

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Iza, sadly, no winners, just losers and losses that will never be covered by the sins of those running rampant.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Amen! Preach it, Sister (or Brother)!! :) :) Destroying the livelihood of law-abiding citizens in no way shines a 'good' light on the 'cause'.... no matter what that 'cause' is. Best of luck at the polls! ;)

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 Comment Written 02-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
    Yvette, thanks!