Comment from dragonpoet

Exceptional

This is a good TV add about the treasure and value of time. There is no price on time. This can also be said about faith.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thanks, Joan.

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Sep-2020

You're welcome
Joan

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

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Nice entry for the Free Verse Poetry Contest. I like free verse best. I love haiku and that is free verse too. I like the freedom to be creative without the meter and rhyme rules.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020

Thanks. We are complete opposites, aren't we? I struggle with free verse. I don't know how to make it like a poem, if it doesn't rhyme or have a meter. It feels random. This one however, was fun to make. I guess it just takes practice.

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 02-Jun-2020

The first couple of years in fanstory I wanted to try everything and I was awful at metered rhymed poetry. I even toon a meter class but to me it took all the fun out of writing. I found my home in haiku and free verse.

reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020

Funny how you find your writing niche, isnt it? I tried to write a horror script once. It just kept changing into a comedy. I gave up. Maybe I'll try again.

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Excellent

I really liked this poem, and you don't know what it's about till you read the very last line, something that is interesting to me. I think you have done really well with this. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020

Thanks for the review, Amanda. I enjoyed writing it. I wish I had been able to make it rhyme though. Maybe I'll work on it some more later.