When Words Don't Rhyme
A Poem about Rhyming8 total reviews
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
This is a fun poem to read!!
I like your title, and the picture!!! This is a very fun poem to read for me!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar :)
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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This is a fun poem to read!!
I like your title, and the picture!!! This is a very fun poem to read for me!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar :)
Comment Written 03-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2020
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Thank you.
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You're welcome!! :)
Comment from Mistydawn
What a cute poem. I imagine trying to make a point while trying to rhyme can be pretty hard. I love your colorful picture of the disheartened clown. It sets the tone of your poem. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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What a cute poem. I imagine trying to make a point while trying to rhyme can be pretty hard. I love your colorful picture of the disheartened clown. It sets the tone of your poem. Nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you. I know I have seen that picture before and just could not wait to get to use it.
Comment from amada
Congratulations in entering this contest; the rules are long, long. It deserves you much credit. I don't rhyme much either, my thoughts get lost trying to find the right word.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Congratulations in entering this contest; the rules are long, long. It deserves you much credit. I don't rhyme much either, my thoughts get lost trying to find the right word.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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The rules were very long on this contest, yes.
Comment from amada
Congratulations in entering this contest; the rules are long, long. It deserves you much credit. I don't rhyme much either, my thoughts get lost trying to find the right word.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Congratulations in entering this contest; the rules are long, long. It deserves you much credit. I don't rhyme much either, my thoughts get lost trying to find the right word.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Mine too.
Comment from Praveen J.
Hello Mia
I might as well chime
with my polite review
before you embrace crime
or some dark voodoo
It would appear to the moderator
who's not smoked a joint
You are missing a collaborator
and that's the prompt's point
Unless its the clown who assisted
your pretty rhyming sing song
though some might call it Twysted
given the clown's ding dong.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Hello Mia
I might as well chime
with my polite review
before you embrace crime
or some dark voodoo
It would appear to the moderator
who's not smoked a joint
You are missing a collaborator
and that's the prompt's point
Unless its the clown who assisted
your pretty rhyming sing song
though some might call it Twysted
given the clown's ding dong.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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very clever.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem. We are not all natural rhymers and we continued need some help to find proper rhyming words that we I'll fit our topic, we find many of rhyming tools online.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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A very well-written rhyming poem. We are not all natural rhymers and we continued need some help to find proper rhyming words that we I'll fit our topic, we find many of rhyming tools online.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Yes I have sites that help me find words that rhyme.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well you had no problem rhyming your words here with some choice words that lifted your poem and made it sing, love the sentiments too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Well you had no problem rhyming your words here with some choice words that lifted your poem and made it sing, love the sentiments too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from robyn corum
Mia,
Reading the notes for the contest, it appears that you have left off the name of whomever you shared the writing of this post with. Did you and someone else create this? If so, their name should also be listed - in the author's notes or somewhere. If NOT and this post was created by yourself, only - it does not meet the requirements of the contest.
--> to be honest, this post sounds like it was created by only one person - given the use of the 'I' pronoun all the way through. Needs a lot of work, if I'm correct.
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Mia,
Reading the notes for the contest, it appears that you have left off the name of whomever you shared the writing of this post with. Did you and someone else create this? If so, their name should also be listed - in the author's notes or somewhere. If NOT and this post was created by yourself, only - it does not meet the requirements of the contest.
--> to be honest, this post sounds like it was created by only one person - given the use of the 'I' pronoun all the way through. Needs a lot of work, if I'm correct.
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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I will look into that.
