The Investigation
50 Word Flash Fiction Contest Entry13 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Great entry for the
50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest. This is funny and terrifying at the same time....lol...It's definitely a dribbled story as it should be. Good word count. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Hello my friend
Great entry for the
50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt contest. This is funny and terrifying at the same time....lol...It's definitely a dribbled story as it should be. Good word count. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thank you for great review, Gypsy. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from phill doran
Sad if true!
But, as the saying goes, every cloud has a silver lining and I am sure for every 20 people or companies to have suffered, one will have profited.
I am sure you will do well with this piece given the topical nature of your topic.
Cheers
phill
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Sad if true!
But, as the saying goes, every cloud has a silver lining and I am sure for every 20 people or companies to have suffered, one will have profited.
I am sure you will do well with this piece given the topical nature of your topic.
Cheers
phill
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Phil. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-word flash fiction story, The Investigation, has the required word count and finds humor where it can be flushed out.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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This fifty-word flash fiction story, The Investigation, has the required word count and finds humor where it can be flushed out.
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Lol. Thank you for the hilarious review, Bill. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from Ogden
Back in the future? Thanks for sharing the news, four years before it breaks.
I'm glad they're going to catch the crooks who caused that next Charmin shortage soon!
Good luck in the voting!
Don
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Back in the future? Thanks for sharing the news, four years before it breaks.
I'm glad they're going to catch the crooks who caused that next Charmin shortage soon!
Good luck in the voting!
Don
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Don. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
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Don't mention it, Ron.
Don
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent Dribble. It is an impressively well-rounded story for a mere 50 words, with background (what happened 4 years ago), body (hunt the cause), climax (conspiracy theory) and relaxation (tag).
I'm not sure conglomerate is actually the right word
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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This is an excellent Dribble. It is an impressively well-rounded story for a mere 50 words, with background (what happened 4 years ago), body (hunt the cause), climax (conspiracy theory) and relaxation (tag).
I'm not sure conglomerate is actually the right word
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Katherine. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from Patty Palmer
LOL I still don't get the reason people ran out to buy toilet paper. I felt like I was part of the Charmin Bear family, needing to get my Charmin fix. There was none to be found. By the time I stood in line to buy my 1limit maximum toilet paper and paper towels, they were out again. I wonder if everybody knows something I don't.
Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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LOL I still don't get the reason people ran out to buy toilet paper. I felt like I was part of the Charmin Bear family, needing to get my Charmin fix. There was none to be found. By the time I stood in line to buy my 1limit maximum toilet paper and paper towels, they were out again. I wonder if everybody knows something I don't.
Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Lol. Thank you for the hilarious review, Patty. Yeah, I don't know the reasoning behind the lack of toilet paper either. I'm just glad we made it through. Lol. Have yourself a wonderful day. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is timely and amusing, a bit of a tragicomedy. I myself, wonder how much Charmin has invested in this. During the Puerto Rico hurricane, it was paper towels and now it's toilet paper. I wonder if there is a connection. Are they a subsidiary of the same conglomerate? Well thought out.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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This is timely and amusing, a bit of a tragicomedy. I myself, wonder how much Charmin has invested in this. During the Puerto Rico hurricane, it was paper towels and now it's toilet paper. I wonder if there is a connection. Are they a subsidiary of the same conglomerate? Well thought out.
Comment Written 31-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Liz. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I think this would be better if it had more info, but of course, then it wouldn't fit in with the prompt. I think this leaves too much open to us and doesn't actually give us enough info to do our own research either.
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reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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I think this would be better if it had more info, but of course, then it wouldn't fit in with the prompt. I think this leaves too much open to us and doesn't actually give us enough info to do our own research either.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thanks. If I had more than 50 words to work with I'm sure I'd have put a lot more info in there. But it's just a stupid joke that apparently some folks don't get no matter how many words there are. Thanks for the review though, Amanda.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Where the pandemic originated will always be in debate. The toilet paper run conspiracy can certainly be considered.
This is a good entry for the 50 Word Flash Fiction writing contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Where the pandemic originated will always be in debate. The toilet paper run conspiracy can certainly be considered.
This is a good entry for the 50 Word Flash Fiction writing contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Rebecca. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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You're welcome.
Comment from AJ McCall
I love these 50-word flash fiction stories. And I love the last line. 2020 will be a year to remember. Especially with the toilet paper thing. I actually saw a video of someone putting it in a safe. Great poem!
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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I love these 50-word flash fiction stories. And I love the last line. 2020 will be a year to remember. Especially with the toilet paper thing. I actually saw a video of someone putting it in a safe. Great poem!
Comment Written 30-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Lol. A safe, huh? That's too funny. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, AJ. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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Your welcome! I love funny poems!
