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Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from
country ranch writer
Nicely done to present the mind of the world these days it is horrayfor them and heck with everyone end. They rink they come first and they are so wrong. They should be glad they are still alive!
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
Thank you for the review and comments. Blessings.
Comment from
kiwisteveh
My latest piece also deals with this tragic milestone moment.
I have a query about the syllable count in line 3 - for me 'ruins' is two syllables...
I am stunned by what I see as the slow-motion trainwreck ongoing in America at the moment. I sincerely think Trump is the absolute worst president to have during this awful crisis.
Steve
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
Thank you, I Overlooked that second syllable - Late night writing. Changing to wrecks.
Thank you for the review and correction.
Comment from
Amanda Louise Davis
You are so right with the words you used in this poem. I aprpeciate these words. Thanks for sharing them with us, and good luck with your contest entry.
Comment Written 28-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
Thank you for the Review and Support with this Entry.
Unfortunately America always seems to take two steps forward and one step backwards.
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