Amid the Morning's Beauty
Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from Elon Vaughn
Very beautiful imagery. And a surprise ending. I had no idea that the crime had already been committed and you were just enjoying the morning. I don't have any suggestions for improvement.
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Very beautiful imagery. And a surprise ending. I had no idea that the crime had already been committed and you were just enjoying the morning. I don't have any suggestions for improvement.
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 30-May-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, Elon. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This story begins with the drinking of aromatic coffee, then in the beautiful sunrise, they moved for their destination by car while enjoying the beauties in the morning; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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This story begins with the drinking of aromatic coffee, then in the beautiful sunrise, they moved for their destination by car while enjoying the beauties in the morning; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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One of them wasn't actually enjoying the beauties by car to their destination so much but pretty close though. Thank you for the review and stars, Al. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The routine in the life of an assassin: drink coffee in the victim mug, on his porch, with his cat, watching over the garden and leaving calmly like nothing had happened :"Before going out to my car, I stopped and thought about the contract taken out on
the Mr. Gabe Wilkens. That lasted about five seconds because reasoning isn't my
concern. Then I stepped over his dead carcass, shut the door and left his farm...
ninety thousand dollars wealthier.
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Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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The routine in the life of an assassin: drink coffee in the victim mug, on his porch, with his cat, watching over the garden and leaving calmly like nothing had happened :"Before going out to my car, I stopped and thought about the contract taken out on
the Mr. Gabe Wilkens. That lasted about five seconds because reasoning isn't my
concern. Then I stepped over his dead carcass, shut the door and left his farm...
ninety thousand dollars wealthier.
"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Yep, that's what happened, just as written. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Iza.
Comment from BethShelby
What a calm assassin. We had a beautiful story going there for a while. I hadn't noticed that it was for the Assassinate me a Thriller contest and you through me for a loop. Nicely done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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What a calm assassin. We had a beautiful story going there for a while. I hadn't noticed that it was for the Assassinate me a Thriller contest and you through me for a loop. Nicely done. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Beth. Yes, that's what I was going for, an unexpected ending. Lol. I really appreciate the good luck wishes. I hope you have a wonderful day.
