Best Friend?
How could you?18 total reviews
Comment from zanya
These stanzas portray the pain and suffering and lasting negative impact of betrayal upon the person on the receiving end of such an act - powerful emotions
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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These stanzas portray the pain and suffering and lasting negative impact of betrayal upon the person on the receiving end of such an act - powerful emotions
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem...its so kind of you. :)
Comment from Puzzle
oh no!!!!! did this really happen?! this is terrible. who knows why she did this. but maybe she has some deep rooted issues that unfortunately she took out on you. i don't see any errors and this poem definitely provoked a feeling. good job!
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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oh no!!!!! did this really happen?! this is terrible. who knows why she did this. but maybe she has some deep rooted issues that unfortunately she took out on you. i don't see any errors and this poem definitely provoked a feeling. good job!
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thank you for reading and for this great review. :)
Comment from D.S. Knight
1. An interesting first-hand testimonial of the pain caused by the cruel use of social media
2. Inconsistent pronoun number, e.g., "someone, their, someone"
3. I hope the speaker gets past this injustice soon
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reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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1. An interesting first-hand testimonial of the pain caused by the cruel use of social media
2. Inconsistent pronoun number, e.g., "someone, their, someone"
3. I hope the speaker gets past this injustice soon
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Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thank you for reading. I don't really pay attention to the elements of poetry that you mentioned. I just write from the heart. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
Oh, wow! This is a poem that REALLY suits the topic of this contest!!! I really liked your word choice, and this poem even made a feel a little sad for the girl who was betrayed! Good luck in the contest!!!!!!!! :)
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Oh, wow! This is a poem that REALLY suits the topic of this contest!!! I really liked your word choice, and this poem even made a feel a little sad for the girl who was betrayed! Good luck in the contest!!!!!!!! :)
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Wow! Thank you for this fantastic review and the 6 shining stars. :)
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from RodG
I really like how you tell this story of betrayal in ballad (4/3/4/3) format. The Speaker comes across as someone who was perhaps a bit too naive. We never do find out HOW that so-called friend betrayed her on Facebook. Stanza 7 can actually stand alone. This story is all too often seen in today's TV dramas. Well-told. Rod
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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I really like how you tell this story of betrayal in ballad (4/3/4/3) format. The Speaker comes across as someone who was perhaps a bit too naive. We never do find out HOW that so-called friend betrayed her on Facebook. Stanza 7 can actually stand alone. This story is all too often seen in today's TV dramas. Well-told. Rod
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your insightful comments...much appreciated.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
Did this happen in real life? Either way, it's a very gripping poem because it tells a story many of us have lived, the betrayal by a friend. Good job with the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Did this happen in real life? Either way, it's a very gripping poem because it tells a story many of us have lived, the betrayal by a friend. Good job with the writing prompt.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Mia Twysted
I just love this poem. I know this feeling all too well as I have a friend who I treated like a sister and she turned on me. It hurts and is a shame that people chose to injury others hearts and souls in such a way.
This had a flow that carried you through beginning to end.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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I just love this poem. I know this feeling all too well as I have a friend who I treated like a sister and she turned on me. It hurts and is a shame that people chose to injury others hearts and souls in such a way.
This had a flow that carried you through beginning to end.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review. It truly made my day. :)
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
I feel your pain and totally understand how you feel. Take it easy, things will fall into place and karma will have a go at her. Betrayal sucks! My very best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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I feel your pain and totally understand how you feel. Take it easy, things will fall into place and karma will have a go at her. Betrayal sucks! My very best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
