Straighten Up?
I know, I know, I should10 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
I just love this clever and funny poem. It shows great creativity and the meter and rhymes are so nicely done too. I enjoyed everything about it and can sort of relate to the theme. I find it difficult to clean my office because the writing beckons me every time I'm in there, so the cleaning has to wait.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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I just love this clever and funny poem. It shows great creativity and the meter and rhymes are so nicely done too. I enjoyed everything about it and can sort of relate to the theme. I find it difficult to clean my office because the writing beckons me every time I'm in there, so the cleaning has to wait.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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well, bless your heart and many thanks for the 6!!
At first, I thought you had the wrong author - I'd forgotten that one, so I appreciate your finding and reading it.
thanks, again!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Straighten Up?
Hello my friend
I think everyone can relate with your poem. I don't mind a little mess but I can't stand a cluttered house. My grandson is two so we have to put up with his toys. Your poem is funny and well written.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Straighten Up?
Hello my friend
I think everyone can relate with your poem. I don't mind a little mess but I can't stand a cluttered house. My grandson is two so we have to put up with his toys. Your poem is funny and well written.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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thanks!
Actually embarrassed myself into cleaning off my desk and my office up yesterday.
Had company over for supper. :)
Thanks again!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is an understandable mess. When writing and inspiration is either there, or you're working hard to get it, this is the aftermath of such a storm. I like it and the message conveyed. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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This is an understandable mess. When writing and inspiration is either there, or you're working hard to get it, this is the aftermath of such a storm. I like it and the message conveyed. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thanks, Jeffrey.
Actually, I embarrassed myself into cleaning it up yesterday as I had company for supper! Now, if it will just stay this way.
Thanks for reading and for your nice comments.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You are so right that folks are either messy or not. Even though I can be messy at times, I know exactly where everything is when I need it. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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You are so right that folks are either messy or not. Even though I can be messy at times, I know exactly where everything is when I need it. Well done!
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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thank you kindly! I actually straightened my desk today - had company for supper. :)
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Ha ha. Sounds like something I would do.
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is a cute poem about your office being a mess. Funny that your house
is neat. I like your two lines....................... I walk into the room and think, this really is disgraceful. Anybody else's house, I'd think, Oh, how distasteful!
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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This is a cute poem about your office being a mess. Funny that your house
is neat. I like your two lines....................... I walk into the room and think, this really is disgraceful. Anybody else's house, I'd think, Oh, how distasteful!
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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thank you. did finally straighten desk!
Comment from Raul1
This poem sounds like this person was in a real mess. He should have shaped up. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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This poem sounds like this person was in a real mess. He should have shaped up. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Well, Raul1, this person - hate to admit it - is female. however today, my desk is clear!!!! embarrassed myself into straightening up. :)
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I really liked this poem. It was very cute and kind of funny, and it also reminds me of how I am when I'm really into writing something. I hope you will keep up your great poetic work on this site.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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I really liked this poem. It was very cute and kind of funny, and it also reminds me of how I am when I'm really into writing something. I hope you will keep up your great poetic work on this site.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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well, bless your heart, and thank you very much. You bet, I will be right here with my rhymes. I spend way too much time here, but it's a fun place to be and I love it.
Thanks aagain.
Comment from Kenneth Gagne
If the intent is to indicate that organized and surprised have an extra syllable, you don't need the hyphen, and the accent should be grave: organizèd / surprisèd.
I like your use of rhyme and how the office, like the writing that takes place there, is messy.
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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If the intent is to indicate that organized and surprised have an extra syllable, you don't need the hyphen, and the accent should be grave: organizèd / surprisèd.
I like your use of rhyme and how the office, like the writing that takes place there, is messy.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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well, thanks a lot
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a very well written and clever "What a mess" poem. I like your rhymes and the way you told your story. The poem was fun and gave me a good chuckle. I could see how a home would be messy and the office really neat. The photo goes great too. Well done! -January L.
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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This is a very well written and clever "What a mess" poem. I like your rhymes and the way you told your story. The poem was fun and gave me a good chuckle. I could see how a home would be messy and the office really neat. The photo goes great too. Well done! -January L.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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well mine is the other way around - I do keep a neat house, as I live alone and was an interior designer, but...office - a different story. I just have fun there.
Thanks for your very nice review.
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I'm backwards... My office has to be in order or I'll go nuts. My house isn't too messy but compared to my immaculate office it's quite different. LOL
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Everywhere there is mess definitely, nothing is neat, tidy, everything in anomalous, we know, find but we forget to straighten up; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Everywhere there is mess definitely, nothing is neat, tidy, everything in anomalous, we know, find but we forget to straighten up; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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thank you so much.
