Heaven on Earth
a contest entry35 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Heaven on Earth
by pharp
Hello my friend
Beautiful presentation. The poem is well written and expresses your love for God. It feels like a prayer. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Heaven on Earth
by pharp
Hello my friend
Beautiful presentation. The poem is well written and expresses your love for God. It feels like a prayer. Good job.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Gypsy,
Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia
I pray you are having a wonderful day.
Comment from Teri7
Portia, This is a very beautiful and very well written true spiritual poem you have penned for the contest. I wish I had six stars to give you my friend. Tom and I are reading in Revelations now. I am going to bookcase this one too. May God bless you as you write for Him! I love you my friend and sister in Christ! Teri
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Portia, This is a very beautiful and very well written true spiritual poem you have penned for the contest. I wish I had six stars to give you my friend. Tom and I are reading in Revelations now. I am going to bookcase this one too. May God bless you as you write for Him! I love you my friend and sister in Christ! Teri
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Teri,
I appreciate your virtual six stars and very kind comments. Your kindness and continued support means a lot to me.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from joycetreasures
Hi Portia,
I pray you and your family are doing well as we continue to endure this unwanted pandemic. This such a beautiful written poem of what Heaven will be like. Also, I love the artwork you used to describe Heaven. In the scriptures it shares what we will see one day in Heaven. I know it will be a breathtaking sight. I think in your first stanza, "my Jesus" should be "by Jesus." The words in your poem are amazingly descriptive, lovely, true, real, factual, and eloquently written about Heaven. God has so much waiting for His true believers. Portia, this poem's message is amazing penned. Your rhymes are also very good. I really enjoyed reading about the home I plan to go to one day with all its Glory. Well-done. Enjoy this Memorial Day. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Hi Portia,
I pray you and your family are doing well as we continue to endure this unwanted pandemic. This such a beautiful written poem of what Heaven will be like. Also, I love the artwork you used to describe Heaven. In the scriptures it shares what we will see one day in Heaven. I know it will be a breathtaking sight. I think in your first stanza, "my Jesus" should be "by Jesus." The words in your poem are amazingly descriptive, lovely, true, real, factual, and eloquently written about Heaven. God has so much waiting for His true believers. Portia, this poem's message is amazing penned. Your rhymes are also very good. I really enjoyed reading about the home I plan to go to one day with all its Glory. Well-done. Enjoy this Memorial Day. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Hello Joyce,
Everyone is doing fine, Roderic has fully recovered; Praise God!
I pray everyone are fine and doing well in your family.
I really appreciate this outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments. I pray for believers all around the world and that God keep all in His loving care. These are trying and difficult times, I continue to pray for deliverance. I pray you enjoyed Memorial's Day on yesterday. Thanks so much for the best wishes and for bringing the typo to my attention.
Have a great week and stay safe and well.
Blessings...Portia
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No worries. Stay Blessed!!!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great poem that focuses on a vision of heaven, and I join you in looking forward to heaven on earth. Will be glad to get out of this crazy world system. I think you meant to say "Jesus by his side," not "my."
Bill
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Great poem that focuses on a vision of heaven, and I join you in looking forward to heaven on earth. Will be glad to get out of this crazy world system. I think you meant to say "Jesus by his side," not "my."
Bill
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Bill,
Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from roof35
This a wonderful message. Your rhymes are perfect. Your picture is also perfect. I do think you have a typo. You say, "Jesus my his side." I think you meant "my" to be "by." Your faith comes through clearly.
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reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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This a wonderful message. Your rhymes are perfect. Your picture is also perfect. I do think you have a typo. You say, "Jesus my his side." I think you meant "my" to be "by." Your faith comes through clearly.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia
