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You Are A Silly Writer

A nonsense writer.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Badger_29
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

yes I enjoyed the story. The style was kind of new to me but it fit the phone quite well. Being free verse, I got the idea that you were looking in the mirror while you were writing this? Silly silly silly, serious serious serious, seriously entertaining.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
    Thanks! I appreciate it very much! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Excellent
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I am quite silly, indeed. And quite happy with just how silly I can be. I love the poem which sounds both playfully childish and somewhat deep at the same time.

 Comment Written 23-May-2020

reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
Excellent
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This is much better and has a good use of emotion. I like reading it and wondering who the author is talking to. Is it their own child? The reader is left to speculate. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-May-2020

reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    What can I do to fix these mistakes? Any advice?
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    Is this version much better? I am trying my best.
reply by Amanda Louise Davis on 23-May-2020
    I would recommend maybe some adjectives, emotions, etc, not just a list of stuff this person is doing. Also, you should take the S out of 'act.' in the 3rd line. Don't worry. You'll get it.
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    Okay, I did my best. You can check it out again. I hope that this poems flows well.
reply by Amanda Louise Davis on 23-May-2020
    Much better now. Nicely done. You took suggestions and made them work in your favor. I changed my rating and review.
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    Thank you, my friend! :)