Broken Resonance
A 5-7-5 contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the message is clear, and the picture is supportive of your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the message is clear, and the picture is supportive of your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Many thanks for your review!
Comment from Vanny
Your poem states a lot emotional meaning to me.
Silence means so much to the heart in so many ways. Less you speak Sometimes means that the hearts need healing. Most of the time this Mouth what we have say too much. The less we speak is better. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Your poem states a lot emotional meaning to me.
Silence means so much to the heart in so many ways. Less you speak Sometimes means that the hearts need healing. Most of the time this Mouth what we have say too much. The less we speak is better. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Many thanks for your review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the heart that doesn't need words to feel the love we have for another and find th love of our lover is true when the come close to us.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the heart that doesn't need words to feel the love we have for another and find th love of our lover is true when the come close to us.
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Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Many thanks for your review!
