The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Now you see me, now you don't"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
11 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Yup, I think we are getting bored here, too. Must think positive thoughts; probably this will soon be behind us; only they say probably the second wave will come soon, this fall.
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Yup, I think we are getting bored here, too. Must think positive thoughts; probably this will soon be behind us; only they say probably the second wave will come soon, this fall.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This Day 20, two-hundred and fifty word story, Now You See Me Now You Don't, has the required line and word count and finds the herb herder living out the quarantine high as a kite and paranoid as a Porky at a pig roast.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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This Day 20, two-hundred and fifty word story, Now You See Me Now You Don't, has the required line and word count and finds the herb herder living out the quarantine high as a kite and paranoid as a Porky at a pig roast.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Mr. Bill your comment made me laugh, and you are right most people chose to take the higher ground:)
Comment from DeboraDyess
lol. I think we've all felt that way -- all of those ways -- during this darned lockdown!
I enjoyed the read, enjoyed the narrator's thought process.
Best of luck in the contest! You did well.
Deb
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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lol. I think we've all felt that way -- all of those ways -- during this darned lockdown!
I enjoyed the read, enjoyed the narrator's thought process.
Best of luck in the contest! You did well.
Deb
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review:)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Be prepared for a Lockdown
Hello my friend
I love your flash fiction entry for the Day 20 writing prompt contest. It's pretty interesting. I love the ending. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Be prepared for a Lockdown
Hello my friend
I love your flash fiction entry for the Day 20 writing prompt contest. It's pretty interesting. I love the ending. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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Thank you so much my dear friend for the amazing review.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Good job on the Day 20 writing challenge. A couple of possible errors. In the second to the last paragraph I think you men "Now you see me..." instead of "No you see me." And in the first paragraph I think you meant to say "Has anyone seen this virus" instead of "Have anyone seen..."
Good picture choice to go with your flash fiction and a good story.
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Good job on the Day 20 writing challenge. A couple of possible errors. In the second to the last paragraph I think you men "Now you see me..." instead of "No you see me." And in the first paragraph I think you meant to say "Has anyone seen this virus" instead of "Have anyone seen..."
Good picture choice to go with your flash fiction and a good story.
Comment Written 23-May-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You are not the only one to suffer a shock to your system. People just do not know how to be isolated under rules meant for their own protection. Everyone is between a rock and a hard place.
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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You are not the only one to suffer a shock to your system. People just do not know how to be isolated under rules meant for their own protection. Everyone is between a rock and a hard place.
Comment Written 23-May-2020
reply by the author on 28-May-2020
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You are right, I am so used to be out all the time, than now I don't know how to walk with a mask and avoid other people.
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I hope this is not our future. The old ways were so much more enjoyable.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This story tells the fun, the hub of the genesis and spread of the pandemic across the world, but it is not so daring as it was planned; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
Inexpressiveness (with or without grammatical errors):
1. Does any one knows if is a woman, a child, a man or a pet? (Does anyone know if it is a woman, a child, a man or a pet?)
2. That is how everything starts: first they lock you in, then they let you starve, and at the (That is how everything starts: first they lock you in, and then they let you starve, and thereafter at the)
3. Weeds, anyone? (This is inexpressive, and this is not grammatically correct.)
ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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This story tells the fun, the hub of the genesis and spread of the pandemic across the world, but it is not so daring as it was planned; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Good luck for the contest. ALCREATOR
Inexpressiveness (with or without grammatical errors):
1. Does any one knows if is a woman, a child, a man or a pet? (Does anyone know if it is a woman, a child, a man or a pet?)
2. That is how everything starts: first they lock you in, then they let you starve, and at the (That is how everything starts: first they lock you in, and then they let you starve, and thereafter at the)
3. Weeds, anyone? (This is inexpressive, and this is not grammatically correct.)
ALCREATOR
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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Mr. Toni, thank you so much for taking the time to review and correct my mistakes. I am glad you like it:)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I see that I'm speaking with an insightful and informed person. It's just the beginning of the end and the beginning of sorrows as you've so eloquently stated. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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I see that I'm speaking with an insightful and informed person. It's just the beginning of the end and the beginning of sorrows as you've so eloquently stated. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Day 20 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of the current situation with everyone self quarantined, and what it means.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Day 20 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of the current situation with everyone self quarantined, and what it means.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flow smoothly with good details and imagery. I like the way you carried your them throughout. Thanks for sharing nd best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flow smoothly with good details and imagery. I like the way you carried your them throughout. Thanks for sharing nd best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Have anyone seen . . . --->Has
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Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 23-May-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, your support means a lot to me.