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Giving tribute to...lyenochka

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Comment from Jacob David Collins
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I enjoyed reading this. It's amazing how much you can learn from other people's work on this site, and improve your own writing at the same time. Your poem did make me wonder who you were referring to as well. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


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    Thanks so much for your review and comments.
Comment from smileycloud
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that is truly lovely
and such a gentle and respectful poem
the message is brilliant and I am sure your teacher is so very proud of her student
lyenochka has always been a great writer and she certainly deserves the recognition
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine tribute to Helen and all her knowledgeable and informative posts as she has such a fond awareness of life, words, facts, figures and delivered them with great finesse as she teaches us. She will no doubt be honoured by this tribute and your praise is truthful and complimentary, and a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Fanstory's Very Own

Hello my friend

I love Lyenochka, and she definitely deserves kudos. She is very kind and helpful. She is going to live this poem in her honor. How nice of you. Well done my friend. Great entry for the
Teacher's Appreciation writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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I second the motion! Lyenochka rules--she's been of much help to me; I reworked a two-part monologue to a dialog on her advice--the play was far more powerful for it. Lovely tribute! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


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Comment from royowen
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But when it comes to Helen I agree, she's very good with her research, she's only been here for only a short time, relatively speaking. Her greatest area of growth is in poetry, that growth has been exponential. She's a real asset to this site.this is an excellent post and entry in this contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
I thought it was twaddle, but then it could be that.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
reply by royowen on 22-May-2020
    Pleasure
Comment from Sophie Clarke
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Being a teacher myself, this poem really hit a tender spot! Wonderful and natural rhyming; well done! (Hopefully we'll be going back to school very soon!)

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


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    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
Comment from Margaret Bednar
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'I value new words - I have never known" (I don't think you need the hypen - it reads well without it)

A sweet poem about the admiration for a teacher.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
Comment from Diana Kane
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This has a great rhythm. It is inspiring and well thought out. What a great thank you to have pen for someone. Absolutely love it. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
Comment from Susan X Smith
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I enjoyed reading this tribute to one of our own poets whose work I also enjoy. This is an excellent entry for the writing prompt contest. The rhyme scheme also works well

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..