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Giving tribute to...lyenochka

45 total reviews 
Comment from Patty Palmer
Exceptional
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This poem deserves Six Stars!! If I could, I'd give your teacher six stars too. The poem is clearly written from the heart with admiration to the poet she learns from continuously. This is very well-written with perfect rhyme and rhythm! Great job! Good luck with the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 22-May-2020


reply by the author on 23-May-2020
    Patty,

    You are always so kind, thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments. Have a great weekend my friend.

    Lots of love... Portia
reply by Patty Palmer on 24-May-2020
    You're welcome~ It deserved six stars for sure! Have a great holiday!
    Love and hugs!
    Patty
Comment from roof35
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Your words describe how I feel about the many wonderful authors on this site. Most seem willing to share their insight. I can find no fault with your poem. The words flow, the structure is right, the rhymes almost perfect. The picture pairs nicely when I re-think your message. I hope to see more of your work.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review...
Comment from w.j.debi
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I agree, lyenochka is a wonderful person. She contributes so much in knowledge and is a wonderful example for the rest of us to emulate. Thank you for taking time to recognize her for her efforts. I don't know where she gets all the energy.

Great job with this one. I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review...
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like this. She is indeed a wonderful, awesome and multifaceted woman. This is an awesome ode to someone who does inspire, teach, and give selflessly of herself. I appreciate you sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 22-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
Comment from Bichon
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This was an excellent poem! Helen's advice is always extremely helpful, and we should all value it! I really enjoyed your kind sediments and the thankful tone. Great work!

 Comment Written 22-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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What a lovely tribute to one of FanStory's very own. This poem is well written and should do well in the Teacher's Appreciation writing contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2020


reply by the author on 22-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 22-May-2020
    You're amply welcome.
Comment from Teri7
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I wish I had six stars to give for this very well written and very nice poem to a person I love dearly also. She is everything you have written and so much more. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and comments.

    Blessings...
Comment from January L'Angelle
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This is a lovely tribute to a wonderful poetry teacher that obviously has taught you many great skills. I loved this poem. The rhymes were spot on and it had a great tempo to it. Well done. -January L.

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings...
Comment from kiwisteveh
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A lovely tribute to Lyenochka. You could have added that she is a perceptive reviewer as well.

Your poem incorporates strong rhymes and generally steady meter to express your ideas..

Good luck in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..
Comment from ameen786
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Great tribute to a fellow FanStorian; lovely, meaningful verses in excellent rhymes and flows gently; also, reminds me of the great adewpearl (late); aka Brooke; thanks for sharing and good luck!

 Comment Written 21-May-2020


reply by the author on 21-May-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.

    Blessings..