Powerful
A Senryu entry8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved your passionate words here and some lines in Shakespeare's sonnets was dedicated to someone who had power and would not use to harm anyone:
They that have power to hurt, and will do none,
That do not do the thing they most do show,
Who, moving others, are themselves as stone,
Unmoved, cold, and to temptation slow;
I thought it appropriate and clever and I feel the same about your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I loved your passionate words here and some lines in Shakespeare's sonnets was dedicated to someone who had power and would not use to harm anyone:
They that have power to hurt, and will do none,
That do not do the thing they most do show,
Who, moving others, are themselves as stone,
Unmoved, cold, and to temptation slow;
I thought it appropriate and clever and I feel the same about your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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So glad this resonated with you, Dolly. Shakespeare has the right idea.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, there was one single angel that killed 185000 marauding Assyrians besieging Jerusalem, King Hezekiah, prayed and poof! No more Assyrians. Yep God could obliterate us with a wave of His mighty hand, what constrains...love. Beautifully written, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Oh yes indeed, there was one single angel that killed 185000 marauding Assyrians besieging Jerusalem, King Hezekiah, prayed and poof! No more Assyrians. Yep God could obliterate us with a wave of His mighty hand, what constrains...love. Beautifully written, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you!
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Well done
Comment from Manh C Dang
Powerful message is conveyed in this Senryu poem! I love the drawing that compliments the poem well. Both invoke deep and tender feelings. I guess that's what Senryu poetry is all about. Good job!
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Powerful message is conveyed in this Senryu poem! I love the drawing that compliments the poem well. Both invoke deep and tender feelings. I guess that's what Senryu poetry is all about. Good job!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The power of forgiveness, this is what this poem talks about. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings. The power to forgive is a great tool.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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The power of forgiveness, this is what this poem talks about. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings. The power to forgive is a great tool.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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So glad this piece resonated with you!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent senyru for the contest
with correct syllables and an excellent poster-like statement.
Perfect picture to match.
You should sent this to politicians.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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You've written an excellent senyru for the contest
with correct syllables and an excellent poster-like statement.
Perfect picture to match.
You should sent this to politicians.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thanks for sharing your insights!
Comment from zanya
Wow - not only is this an interesting visual to illustrate but also some very wise maxims delivered through the medium of Senryu- who could fail to notice that big cat !
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Wow - not only is this an interesting visual to illustrate but also some very wise maxims delivered through the medium of Senryu- who could fail to notice that big cat !
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Diana Kane
Very structured parameters always challenge me. This is a powerful piece. I think it's very accurate and true to life. Succinct and clear as to the message. Fantastic job.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Very structured parameters always challenge me. This is a powerful piece. I think it's very accurate and true to life. Succinct and clear as to the message. Fantastic job.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is the best Senryu poem that I've see so far. I like the way you wrote it as a story. I like the subject matter too. The photo is awesome. Well done. -January L.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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This is the best Senryu poem that I've see so far. I like the way you wrote it as a story. I like the subject matter too. The photo is awesome. Well done. -January L.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
