The Edge of Convenience
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Comment from Louise Michelle
Oh, wow, I must praise you on the originality of this piece. The image you chose is spectacular and I love the message you so cleverly wove into the poem. I particularly liked the touch of mysticism. Well done. Hugs, Lou
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Oh, wow, I must praise you on the originality of this piece. The image you chose is spectacular and I love the message you so cleverly wove into the poem. I particularly liked the touch of mysticism. Well done. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
Comment from Minglement
What a fantastic presentation for your interesting poem. I'm not sure I followed it completely but it felt spiritual and otherworldly and inspirational. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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What a fantastic presentation for your interesting poem. I'm not sure I followed it completely but it felt spiritual and otherworldly and inspirational. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2020
Comment from diamondbogle
I love this! Its really poignant. I also like the picture you used and how it follows the Pledge. I like how your poem flows nicely in general. Overall very good job with this little poem. It made me feel all the feels.
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I love this! Its really poignant. I also like the picture you used and how it follows the Pledge. I like how your poem flows nicely in general. Overall very good job with this little poem. It made me feel all the feels.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
Comment from Reese Turner
Certainly a free verse containing lots of thought. Enjoyed reading it and the picture fit nicely. Not sure I fully understand it, but I don't think that was your point.
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Certainly a free verse containing lots of thought. Enjoyed reading it and the picture fit nicely. Not sure I fully understand it, but I don't think that was your point.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
This free verse styled poem along with this most unique colorful art piece makes a dynamic duo of a presentation. Much success to you n the contest.
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This free verse styled poem along with this most unique colorful art piece makes a dynamic duo of a presentation. Much success to you n the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Interesting and very well thought out free verse poem;-) Btw good luck on the contest!!!
Well written and words fit together nicely as well as the meanings you describe before the poem!
Thank you for sharing;-)
God bless;-)
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Interesting and very well thought out free verse poem;-) Btw good luck on the contest!!!
Well written and words fit together nicely as well as the meanings you describe before the poem!
Thank you for sharing;-)
God bless;-)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
Comment from tfawcus
An oath of allegiance with a difference. An infinitely congenial universe
with freedom and neutralism for all certainly sounds like Paradise to me. Let's work towards it here on Earth.
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An oath of allegiance with a difference. An infinitely congenial universe
with freedom and neutralism for all certainly sounds like Paradise to me. Let's work towards it here on Earth.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2020
Comment from Rachel Carrington
I really like the sentiment behind this poem as well as the inspiration. The final line is such an important one. You clearly have a talent for writing poetry, and I hope you keep it up!
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I really like the sentiment behind this poem as well as the inspiration. The final line is such an important one. You clearly have a talent for writing poetry, and I hope you keep it up!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from RGstar
Positive ambiance and projection in all sense of the word. God and infinity joined solidifies the oath. A strong write. One can almost feel the energy. Such the power of words.
Well done. My best wishes.
RGstar
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Positive ambiance and projection in all sense of the word. God and infinity joined solidifies the oath. A strong write. One can almost feel the energy. Such the power of words.
Well done. My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
Comment from Ric Myworld
The world as we know it, is out of control. Every day new challenges to overcome, and most, made by our own shortsightedness, anger, and greed. Maybe we could have your words stamped on our foreheads for others to see? LOL. Thanks for sharing! I wish I had a sixer.
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The world as we know it, is out of control. Every day new challenges to overcome, and most, made by our own shortsightedness, anger, and greed. Maybe we could have your words stamped on our foreheads for others to see? LOL. Thanks for sharing! I wish I had a sixer.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
