The Edge of Convenience
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Comment from victor 66
I appreciate your sentiment and I wish I could agree with your hope. But it seems to me, that humans are the only creatures on this planet that take more than they need and then destroy the very environment that nourishes them. My only thought is, how long will it be before our extinction? Perhaps it's already started. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I appreciate your sentiment and I wish I could agree with your hope. But it seems to me, that humans are the only creatures on this planet that take more than they need and then destroy the very environment that nourishes them. My only thought is, how long will it be before our extinction? Perhaps it's already started. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Perhaps they are one in the same. Thank you kindly for your review. Best wishes to you.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
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You are most welcome, opal. And your reply was most gracious. Stay well.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
An interesting concept and title for a poem, and one that more people need to notice. The Edge of Convenience...I wonder how those who thrive on "convenience" would feel about being on the edge of it, possibly about to be plunged into a sea of inconvenience.
Of course, if we truly could grasp the concept of a multiverse, convenience wouldn't exist. A pipe dream? No. It could be reality, if we'd all simply listen.
Great work!
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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An interesting concept and title for a poem, and one that more people need to notice. The Edge of Convenience...I wonder how those who thrive on "convenience" would feel about being on the edge of it, possibly about to be plunged into a sea of inconvenience.
Of course, if we truly could grasp the concept of a multiverse, convenience wouldn't exist. A pipe dream? No. It could be reality, if we'd all simply listen.
Great work!
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Very well said. Thank you kindly for sharing your words. I appreciate them.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from StrengthInNumbers
I certainly get the feeling that you are existing on a higher plane of consciousness than most.
The artwork is stunning.
I love the message you bring forth with the poem, and in your notes underneath. Very spiritual. Well done!
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I certainly get the feeling that you are existing on a higher plane of consciousness than most.
The artwork is stunning.
I love the message you bring forth with the poem, and in your notes underneath. Very spiritual. Well done!
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the words shared in your review. I appreciate them very much.
Best wishes to you.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Huguette M. Forest-Coultry
A change is needed, and with this pandemic I believe a lot of people are seeking peace and possibility. It is in the solitude of the soul that we come to one-ness. A place where I often dwell in meditation and prayer for the whole-ness of the planet. I love this artwork as well. Great work.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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A change is needed, and with this pandemic I believe a lot of people are seeking peace and possibility. It is in the solitude of the soul that we come to one-ness. A place where I often dwell in meditation and prayer for the whole-ness of the planet. I love this artwork as well. Great work.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review! I couldn?t agree more. I dwell there as well. Best wishes to you.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Way to go on a universal outlook in a very gentle parody of sorts of the Pledge of Allegiance. I like the phrase 'infinitely congenial.' What a soulful share today. Very unusual art choice, too.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Way to go on a universal outlook in a very gentle parody of sorts of the Pledge of Allegiance. I like the phrase 'infinitely congenial.' What a soulful share today. Very unusual art choice, too.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review! I am happy you enjoyed it. I almost wrote this absent the infinite but felt congenial needed a bit more emphasis. Best wishes to you.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent opening line to set up your theme. I think the last time I heard anyone swear fealty to anyone was in the novel Ivanhoe, but then there aren't too many feudal lords around anymore. Anyway, the universe is more stable than any person and more likely to honor your fealty. It will be a great day indeed when we accomplish the universal understanding and respect you propose.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Excellent opening line to set up your theme. I think the last time I heard anyone swear fealty to anyone was in the novel Ivanhoe, but then there aren't too many feudal lords around anymore. Anyway, the universe is more stable than any person and more likely to honor your fealty. It will be a great day indeed when we accomplish the universal understanding and respect you propose.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for the review. I am happy the poem resonated with you. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Caitriona
This is super creative and with the current environment, it may create with in us a question of what else is out there. This could have been used in GOTG! Interesting take on the Pledge from here on earth. Thanks, C.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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This is super creative and with the current environment, it may create with in us a question of what else is out there. This could have been used in GOTG! Interesting take on the Pledge from here on earth. Thanks, C.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review! I?ll have to watch GOTG at long last I feel. Best wishes to you.
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Free Verse poetry contest.
This lovely piece has a good spiritual message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Free Verse poetry contest.
This lovely piece has a good spiritual message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you Sharon for the kind review. I appreciate your words. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
Comment from Kathleen King
I really enjoyed "The Edge of Convenience"
You have a unique voice absolutely your own. This poem made me smile, I especially like the "(s)" in world(s), as it brought us to your vision and idea. I thought it was clever that you used the structure of "The Pledge of Allegiance".
Such a unique voice
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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I really enjoyed "The Edge of Convenience"
You have a unique voice absolutely your own. This poem made me smile, I especially like the "(s)" in world(s), as it brought us to your vision and idea. I thought it was clever that you used the structure of "The Pledge of Allegiance".
Such a unique voice
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Hello Kathleen and thank you kindly for your words shared and amazing review. I appreciate them very much. I am very pleased you enjoyed the poem. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
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You are so welcome
Keep writing
You are awesome
Comment from nomi338
Welcome indeed Opal Rose. ( I love your Pen Name). I agree that our fealty should be much more inclusive than just to a a block, a street, a city or even a country. This is a very large world that exists inside a very large galaxy, that exists inside a plethora of galaxies. So we in our suddenly very tiny space can think for one moment that swearing our allegiance to a specific place is a big deal, just might be a bit presumptive. Very nice write.
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Welcome indeed Opal Rose. ( I love your Pen Name). I agree that our fealty should be much more inclusive than just to a a block, a street, a city or even a country. This is a very large world that exists inside a very large galaxy, that exists inside a plethora of galaxies. So we in our suddenly very tiny space can think for one moment that swearing our allegiance to a specific place is a big deal, just might be a bit presumptive. Very nice write.
Comment Written 22-May-2020
reply by the author on 22-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for this wonderful review and complement on my name. I appreciate your words shared very much. I am happy the poem resonated with you. Best wishes to you!
Sincerely,
Opal Rose
