Sense of Heaven
Close your eyes...15 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this expression it's so poetic - a brush of nighttime it goes do well with the picture. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
I love this expression it's so poetic - a brush of nighttime it goes do well with the picture. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 21-May-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from qinluo
Oh, a wonderful poem , falling into the ocean of keen and delicate nature. The fruit of practicing , right ï¼?I love it . When the sunshine pouring down , itch my eyes , enjoy the baptism from the nature and ground , the birds whisper to ear of sky , wind wanna kiss the birds , birds are shy , then roll in the sky with light .ahahahah l lost the metre .
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
Oh, a wonderful poem , falling into the ocean of keen and delicate nature. The fruit of practicing , right ï¼?I love it . When the sunshine pouring down , itch my eyes , enjoy the baptism from the nature and ground , the birds whisper to ear of sky , wind wanna kiss the birds , birds are shy , then roll in the sky with light .ahahahah l lost the metre .
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you for your review!
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Good morning , the line of ants on the ground provide me with a fantasy route and roll me into small world with joy and foolly .Aha
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Angels are messengers from God. He uses them to serve us, help and protect us--whatever He tells them to do for humans. They serve us.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
Angels are messengers from God. He uses them to serve us, help and protect us--whatever He tells them to do for humans. They serve us.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Close your eyes...
Sense of Heaven
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest and the presentation. Good naani form. Great imagery.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
Close your eyes...
Sense of Heaven
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest and the presentation. Good naani form. Great imagery.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this beautiful, appealing poem. Since the Bible describes angels as "ministering spirits"
sent by God (Hebrews 1:14), this could literally happen.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this beautiful, appealing poem. Since the Bible describes angels as "ministering spirits"
sent by God (Hebrews 1:14), this could literally happen.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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You are so right! Thank you for stopping by...
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are soothing, descriptive and creative. I found the
word of this poem to be calming and give hope. The artwork is perfect
and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
The author's words are soothing, descriptive and creative. I found the
word of this poem to be calming and give hope. The artwork is perfect
and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani about the sense of heaven that we can expect from gentle breezes in the early night sky, is like a brush from an angel on our skin suggesting subtle hints.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
A very well-written Naani about the sense of heaven that we can expect from gentle breezes in the early night sky, is like a brush from an angel on our skin suggesting subtle hints.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you, Sandra!
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Six Stars! You said so much in four lines and the picture is perfect! I am so aware of the presence of angels and I know for sure that they are active here on earth. What a lovely and gentle reminder of their gentle care.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
Six Stars! You said so much in four lines and the picture is perfect! I am so aware of the presence of angels and I know for sure that they are active here on earth. What a lovely and gentle reminder of their gentle care.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Oh my! Thank you for such an awesome review and those bright and shiny stars - I am so very glad to know that this spoke to your heart...that means so much to me to hear!! Be safe and have a wonderful Wednesday! 8-)
Comment from AJ McCall
Love the picture. The poem is sweet and short and flows well. It gives me a feeling of peace and love when I read this. Very calm. Amazing work.
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
Love the picture. The poem is sweet and short and flows well. It gives me a feeling of peace and love when I read this. Very calm. Amazing work.
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you, AJ!!
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you're welcome!
Comment from papa55mike
We have no idea how many Angels walk by us, every day. What a wonderfully written poem, and I learned another form of poetry.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
We have no idea how many Angels walk by us, every day. What a wonderfully written poem, and I learned another form of poetry.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 20-May-2020
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Thank you, Mike!