Always a Tomorrow
A 5-7-5 contest offering18 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the philosophy behind these words as one disappointment will lead to our triumph and a journey along our own path, much enjoyed . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I love the philosophy behind these words as one disappointment will lead to our triumph and a journey along our own path, much enjoyed . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Many thanks for your review this morning!
Comment from Diana Kane
Truer words were never spoken. This is clear and concise with some great word choices. Absolutely fabulous job With this. I totally enjoyed it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Truer words were never spoken. This is clear and concise with some great word choices. Absolutely fabulous job With this. I totally enjoyed it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Many thanks for your review this morning!
Comment from royowen
I rather like the idea, of forging our own trail, in fact that's what we will do. I was watching a program on being brain washed, and to an extent that's, but there is part of us that has a God consciousness, that allows us to break free. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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I rather like the idea, of forging our own trail, in fact that's what we will do. I was watching a program on being brain washed, and to an extent that's, but there is part of us that has a God consciousness, that allows us to break free. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Many thanks for your review this morning!
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Most welcome
Comment from Manh C Dang
What incredible imagery this poem portrays! The words are powerful, meaningful, and inspirational. it doesn't hurt that the accompanying painting is also awesome. Great work! Deserve a 6!
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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What incredible imagery this poem portrays! The words are powerful, meaningful, and inspirational. it doesn't hurt that the accompanying painting is also awesome. Great work! Deserve a 6!
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Good morning, Mahn! Thank you so much for your wonderful review and especially for the awesome stars - it is always a wonderful feeling to know that my words reach across and touch another. :) Take care out there and have a wonderful week! :)
P.S. When the contest is over, I would love to have you stop by my profile page as I believe that, for some years in your career, you may have worked with my mother. Unless, of course, I have your name crossed with another Dr. Dang in Huntsville... :) ;) I will leave the choice of contact completely in your court, sir, and please know that if I do not hear back from you on the matter, it will be as if this message never happened and no harm, no foul. Blessings! :) :)
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Of course, I would love that! I'm an oncologist in Huntsville who works with another oncologist with the same last name. We're not related. We're even ethnically different. I told him all the time that he stole my name, due to my reputation, lol. God bless and good luck with the contest!
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. The message is clear and I like the imagery you used. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. The message is clear and I like the imagery you used. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Many thanks for your review this evening!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Many thanks for your review this evening!
Comment from kahpot
Very well written, must admit I was expecting the last line to read something like "new trail" as the end of a road suggests it was our/your trail, love the artwork, if I have misread this one please help me to understand, best wishes in the contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Very well written, must admit I was expecting the last line to read something like "new trail" as the end of a road suggests it was our/your trail, love the artwork, if I have misread this one please help me to understand, best wishes in the contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Around here, when you're driving down a road and it actually ends, you have to choose whether to switch over to AWD and keep going (forge your own path) or turn around (quit/find another road). Thank you for your review.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
The painting is just amazing. Doesn't even need the words. Text is perfectly matched. Nothing to improve here! Inspiring. Hope.
Thank you for the opportunity to review this lovely art.
Well done!
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reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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The painting is just amazing. Doesn't even need the words. Text is perfectly matched. Nothing to improve here! Inspiring. Hope.
Thank you for the opportunity to review this lovely art.
Well done!
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Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Many thanks, Lucy!
