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The Delivery

A story of a newborn baby

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha! What a shocker! This story made me smile and it certainly packed a punch! I expect this has happened more than once in life, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-May-2020


reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    I expect so. Thank you so Dolly so much for your kind review. Stay safe.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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(blood stream s/b bloodstream; hyphenate ear-to-ear, red-hued, life-changing, germ-filled, bared s/b bore resemblance.) This is an amusing story--didn't see it coming--neither did John! Good luck. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 18-May-2020


reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Thank you so much Liz for taking the time for your review. I will make the corrections. Cheers to you.