An Enchanted Celebration
Conjuring the ABC's of magical fun...23 total reviews
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I loved this, absolutely loved it, but I would take 'whilst circles call clowns!' off the last line if it were me. It makes as much sense and has a better flow if you do that I think. Taking my advice or no, this is a great poem.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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I loved this, absolutely loved it, but I would take 'whilst circles call clowns!' off the last line if it were me. It makes as much sense and has a better flow if you do that I think. Taking my advice or no, this is a great poem.
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Comment Written 18-May-2020
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Comment from Jacob David Collins
I thought this was a fun poem and really well written, I have to say that I really like the image of Hogwarts as well. I liked also the inclusion of different characters as well which made your poem come to life even more. I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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I thought this was a fun poem and really well written, I have to say that I really like the image of Hogwarts as well. I liked also the inclusion of different characters as well which made your poem come to life even more. I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you for dropping by for the review on this fun one - always enjoy pretending, even as a grown-up!!
Comment from richie b
Amazing ABC poem. Full of enchantment and imagery.
Including the likes of Arthur and Galahad puts a
bow on your poem.
Your castle print puts the reader on the guest list.
your poem has the pizazz of a magical spell.
Your entry is written nobly and should be the poem
to beat!
Peace,
Richie b
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Amazing ABC poem. Full of enchantment and imagery.
Including the likes of Arthur and Galahad puts a
bow on your poem.
Your castle print puts the reader on the guest list.
your poem has the pizazz of a magical spell.
Your entry is written nobly and should be the poem
to beat!
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Yes, Galahad and Arthur must stand for their bud, hmmm?! Of course they must!! ;-) Thank you for the awesome review, Richie - so glad you enjoyed!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
An Enchanted Celebration
Hello my friend,
This poem looks a lot like the work of my friend, Yvette, but I am not sure. The presentation is breathtaking. The fantasy poem is awesome. Well done my friend. I never have seen a complete alphabet for the ABC Poetry contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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An Enchanted Celebration
Hello my friend,
This poem looks a lot like the work of my friend, Yvette, but I am not sure. The presentation is breathtaking. The fantasy poem is awesome. Well done my friend. I never have seen a complete alphabet for the ABC Poetry contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Wow. I am honored being compared to your friend - I hear she's quite the fantasy gal!! ;-) ;-) Thanx so much, Gypsy, for not only the awesome review but also the smile that will last the day/evening -- you take care of you out there on the coast!
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
I had to give this a six star rating because I couldn't even imagine tackling the ABC contest. You have handled the challenge like a pro and I am so amazed by this work. The artwork is perfect too! This is a standout.
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I had to give this a six star rating because I couldn't even imagine tackling the ABC contest. You have handled the challenge like a pro and I am so amazed by this work. The artwork is perfect too! This is a standout.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Oh my goodness - THANK YOU for this great review and those beautiful stars! It was fun envisioning such a fantastical party, and I officially invite you to join us! Have a wonderful week wherever you are!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem calling all the witches and wizards for an annual party where everything is just magical from the music to the dances happening with their wands.
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A very well-written ABC poem calling all the witches and wizards for an annual party where everything is just magical from the music to the dances happening with their wands.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thanks so much, Sandra! Be sure to enjoy the party!
Comment from Sophie Clarke
Oh wow! LOVED this poem! I was really dubious about the idea of an ABC poem but you've really managed to interweave the progression of the alphabet throughout the poem pretty flawlessly (the only point it feels forced is the X, but let's face it; that is always going to be a head-scratcher). I also really enjoyed all of references to literary fantasy characters. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Oh wow! LOVED this poem! I was really dubious about the idea of an ABC poem but you've really managed to interweave the progression of the alphabet throughout the poem pretty flawlessly (the only point it feels forced is the X, but let's face it; that is always going to be a head-scratcher). I also really enjoyed all of references to literary fantasy characters. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you so much! Enjoy the party today!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
I'm sorry, I didn't know the meaning of the words in the first two lines, but
I was able to read enough of your poem to say it was delightful. I wish
I was invited. It's very good work in spite of my illiteracy.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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I'm sorry, I didn't know the meaning of the words in the first two lines, but
I was able to read enough of your poem to say it was delightful. I wish
I was invited. It's very good work in spite of my illiteracy.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Lol! ;) Worry not, sir -- the first one is a word stage magicians have used forever: say it out loud while you reach into your hat to pull out a rabbit (wink, wink!). ;) Oh, and the second one? Completely and totally made up .... sort of like the other 'magic word' from the old Hollywood movies about genies and stuff: Ala-kazzam!! ;) ;) I am really glad you enjoyed my silly poem... was just in one of those moods, I suppose! Take care and enjoy the week ahead! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very inventive write, filled with mystery, fantasy and fun. It is well thought out and a joy to read, clever and a major feat! Much enjoyed, ideal for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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This is a very inventive write, filled with mystery, fantasy and fun. It is well thought out and a joy to read, clever and a major feat! Much enjoyed, ideal for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you so much! Enjoy the party!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your title is a good description for this lovely ABC poem including many of the well known storybook characters.
Still no word from Harry - cheeky line, made me smile. Enjoyed your poem, good luck in the contest,
cheers
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Your title is a good description for this lovely ABC poem including many of the well known storybook characters.
Still no word from Harry - cheeky line, made me smile. Enjoyed your poem, good luck in the contest,
cheers
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you so much! Enjoy the party!
