The Stroller
150 Word Story contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Very nice piece you've crafted for the competition here. Spot on word count too. I hope it does well as it's different from the rest. Good fun piece.
GMG
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Hi there,
Very nice piece you've crafted for the competition here. Spot on word count too. I hope it does well as it's different from the rest. Good fun piece.
GMG
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review, GMG. I really appreciate the generous stars and the good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from humpwhistle
Well, I guess that's what happens when people can't restrain themselves.
I'm not sure I'd want to work for either of them. Or, ride the subway, for that matter.
The coincidence at the end gives your story the 'Flash finale'.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Well, I guess that's what happens when people can't restrain themselves.
I'm not sure I'd want to work for either of them. Or, ride the subway, for that matter.
The coincidence at the end gives your story the 'Flash finale'.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Lee. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
