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Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians

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Comment from pharp
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Helen,

I am not familiar with this style (Sapphonic Triad). Your prayer is sincere and heartfelt, gracefully penned. We are blessed her on Fanstory, there are so many who really care as we support one another through the good and difficult times in our lives. Thanks for your continued support for all of us. I know we all thank God for you. Stay save and well my friend. God answers prayers, I'm a living witness.

God Bless...Portia

 Comment Written 19-May-2020


reply by the author on 19-May-2020
    Amen! I'm so glad that the Lord answered our prayers for you, Portia! Thank you for praying with us and for your lovely review! Hugs!
Comment from w.j.debi
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This is a beautiful prayer and such a thoughtful request to make for another member of Fanstory.
Your sopphonic triad is well constructed with a poignant plea of faith for comfort.

 Comment Written 19-May-2020


reply by the author on 19-May-2020
    Thank you, Debi! Just getting the word out there about another Fanstorian's struggles.
    Bless you!
Comment from kahpot
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I like this form, what an excellent poem and well wishes for one of the FS family, and yes I do hope they hear all of the prayers, a wonderful read and thank you for sharing****kahpot

 Comment Written 18-May-2020


reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Kahpot. I hope you'll give the form a try. Thank you for the affirmation of God hearing our prayers!
    Blessings!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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He does indeed hear and understand sister Helen. The Bible declares that He knows what we have need of before we ask, but, He still wants us to ask. It also talks about sometimes when we pray we don't know how to pray as we ought to, but the spirit prays with groanings that cannot be uttered. That verse or verses goes a like that. Forgive me if I didn't get it exactly right. I've cried out like this many times in the night watches. The Lamb of God heard my cries and came to my rescue. I really enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 18-May-2020


reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    Amen! He understands and the Spirit translates our cries and groans. Thanks for the wonderful review, Jeffrey! Blessings!
Comment from sunnilicious
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Mary Kay is a nice person. I haven't seen her around here in years. Sorry to hear about her husband. Let us pray for him. That was a beautiful poem that you wrote. Peace be upon you. Lovely work :)

 Comment Written 18-May-2020


reply by the author on 19-May-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and the prayers, Alicia! Appreciate you! Hugs!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Sapphonic Triad about the text of Lamentations 2:19, we are depending on God's grace to keep us safe from danger every day and specifically during this threatening times.

 Comment Written 18-May-2020


reply by the author on 19-May-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Sandra!
    Blessings on your week!
Comment from royowen
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I think this a marvellous saphonic triad Helen. And it certainly stands up and holds these wonderful scriptures, and it gives a wonderful boost, and of course, you've done a super job with it, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Roy! Please keep Mary Kay's husband in your prayers!
    Bless you!
reply by royowen on 18-May-2020
    Of course Helen
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Helen, I do not know if it is this Sapphonic poetry dance or your excellent writing that makes this post sound like real poetry. But this post was a joy to read.

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you for your kind words, Suzanna. I recommend you try this form - it's perfect for when you have a quote you really like.
    Hugs!
Comment from Irish Rain
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Yes, I know God will hear the prayers
for Jorge.
Lovely poem, and prayer in itself, plus
such a blessing for Mary and Jorge.
Beautiful Miss Helen.
Blessings...

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Miss Judy! Appreciate your support. Let's keep holding onto Jesus' Hands. Hugs!
reply by Irish Rain on 18-May-2020
    Amen and big hugs to you this week!!!
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
    ♥♥
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Thank you, Helen, for sharing this sad news with FS. Your words are from your heart. They read well. However, this style is difficult to write. But that doesn't lessen your compassion for Mary Kay in her time of need. I will pray for her and her husband. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 17-May-2020


reply by the author on 17-May-2020
    Thank you so much, Jan. I think the forms you write are much more difficult than this. Appreciate your prayers most of all! Hugs!