"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Break My Heart and Hope 2 Die"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
It's difficult to review something like this, as it's such a personal and heartfelt poem. It shares some of the emotion and stress you went through, and you've done a really good job of communicating this. As someone who hasn't ever been in that position, it's hard to fully understand, but reading your words does a good job of trying to explain it and helping others understand what it must have been like - I think there needs to be much more understanding in the world, and poetry is a great way of helping this. I hope writing about it now brings some comfort.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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It's difficult to review something like this, as it's such a personal and heartfelt poem. It shares some of the emotion and stress you went through, and you've done a really good job of communicating this. As someone who hasn't ever been in that position, it's hard to fully understand, but reading your words does a good job of trying to explain it and helping others understand what it must have been like - I think there needs to be much more understanding in the world, and poetry is a great way of helping this. I hope writing about it now brings some comfort.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you very much I'm always appreciating your wonderful reviews!
Ricky
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Silent and Deadly...
Aware not but Ready...
Inclusive but Steady...
This Silent but Deadly...
This first part broke my heart even before the rest which is so full of truth and emotion
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Silent and Deadly...
Aware not but Ready...
Inclusive but Steady...
This Silent but Deadly...
This first part broke my heart even before the rest which is so full of truth and emotion
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks Barbara.
Always a great pleasure.
Ricky