Comment from Margaret Bednar

Excellent

Oh, temptation. This is so true. You met the requirements for this 5-7-5 poetry prompt. I can find no con. The image above certainly depicts turmoil!

 Comment Written 18-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Hello Margaret, I appreciate your time and the the wonderful review; thank you very much.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Lots of training and focus to get there... :) :) This is a great offering for the 5-7-5 contest! ;) Thank you for sharing your originality and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 18-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Hello friend, much obliged; thank you for visiting and the kind review.

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Excellent

I like this poem and the advice it gives also. Very nice job with it. It has a lot of wisdom in just a few words. Keep up your creative poetic work. You're doing great.

 Comment Written 16-May-2020

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reply by the author on 16-May-2020

Hello Amanda, I appreciate your time and the encouraging comments; thank you very much; please be safe.

Comment from Janilou

Excellent

Desires divert soul
from doing virtuous deeds-
discipline the heart

We do have to be careful for these words are very true. We must strive not to allow this to happen. I enjoyed your short poem. Nothing to correct. A good lesson to remember.
Jan

 Comment Written 16-May-2020

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reply by the author on 16-May-2020

Hi Jan, glad you like the write; appreciate your time and the kind review, thank you and please be safe.