Spring secret
Three line poetry5 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Well, this should be the symbol for the gender issue that is front and cente these days. Maybe it is, I don't know. It is a gorgeous flower. Your poem meets the requirements for a 5-7-5. I can find no con.
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Well, this should be the symbol for the gender issue that is front and cente these days. Maybe it is, I don't know. It is a gorgeous flower. Your poem meets the requirements for a 5-7-5. I can find no con.
Comment Written 18-May-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An up-close-and-personal meeting with the naked Calla... :) :) This is a great offering for the 5-7-5 contest! ;) Thank you for sharing your originality and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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An up-close-and-personal meeting with the naked Calla... :) :) This is a great offering for the 5-7-5 contest! ;) Thank you for sharing your originality and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 18-May-2020
Comment from Freelo59
im glad you were able to use my photograph. the first two lines seem very elegant but I wasn't crazy for the third line. gentle balance hue- maybe better?
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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im glad you were able to use my photograph. the first two lines seem very elegant but I wasn't crazy for the third line. gentle balance hue- maybe better?
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Oooh thanks so much. Will change the line.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Spring Secret, has the right set up and presents some awesome colored lilies which trend towards purple and a gender blend. Interesting.
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This 5-7-5, Spring Secret, has the right set up and presents some awesome colored lilies which trend towards purple and a gender blend. Interesting.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I really liked your description in your 5-7-5. I loved the imagery in your writing which I imagine must be quite hard to do with just a few short words. A well written piece, good luck in the contest!
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I really liked your description in your 5-7-5. I loved the imagery in your writing which I imagine must be quite hard to do with just a few short words. A well written piece, good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-May-2020
