Tree of Knowledge
How we got where we are today.5 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good and very true words. You also used very good imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good and very true words. You also used very good imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much for your review. I appreciate the comments you gave.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
She had a choice of trees - Poor Eve will always be blamed but Adam shared equally to my way of thinking. One can always say no. I can find no fault - you met the requirements of a 5-7-5
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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She had a choice of trees - Poor Eve will always be blamed but Adam shared equally to my way of thinking. One can always say no. I can find no fault - you met the requirements of a 5-7-5
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much for reviewing. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah... it didn't really take much, did it? :) :) This is a great offering for the 5-7-5 contest! ;) Thank you for sharing your originality and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Yeah... it didn't really take much, did it? :) :) This is a great offering for the 5-7-5 contest! ;) Thank you for sharing your originality and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 18-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much for your review. As always greatly respect your comments.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Poet,
You've written an excellent poem for the 5-7-5 contest
with the biblical theme of the Garden of Eden
and temptation.
Many will relate.
Nicely done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Hello Poet,
You've written an excellent poem for the 5-7-5 contest
with the biblical theme of the Garden of Eden
and temptation.
Many will relate.
Nicely done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much for your review and comments. Appreciate you taking the time to read it.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This was interesting and obviously made me think of Genesis. I think you did a great job with this poem. I appreciated you sharing this one with us. It's very good to see things that make sense.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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This was interesting and obviously made me think of Genesis. I think you did a great job with this poem. I appreciated you sharing this one with us. It's very good to see things that make sense.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you ever so much for your review and your comments. Appreciate you taking the time to read it.
