Mother Earth
I've been isolated too long21 total reviews
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This didn't have the best flow to the words. My example would be the word 'into' not needing to be there at the beginning of line 7. I liked the meaning and the message of this poem, however.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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This didn't have the best flow to the words. My example would be the word 'into' not needing to be there at the beginning of line 7. I liked the meaning and the message of this poem, however.
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Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you Amanda. Your comment is appreciated. I really enjoy receiving comments that offer constructive comment. Thank you again for being honest.
