Covid Spring
Spring poem3 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, it is different, but it is only for a little while.
You have nice couplets and color in the poem goes well with the picture.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Yes, it is different, but it is only for a little while.
You have nice couplets and color in the poem goes well with the picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Margaret Bednar
We are able to walk outside. Granted some park trails were closed for a bit , but see quite a few people walking about at a safe distance (with masks even if it is a busy area) I'm a quilter and poet so I stay busy. Even a better cook! This poem makes me sad that your spring isn't better. I say we have time to explore hobbies... This poem gives us a sad view of spring... And all the Netflix special series and such (I'm getting addicted to a few!) Hugs to you, whoever you are.
I'd have liked to hear more of what you can't see - take us down memory lane - what was your favorite place to go to in the past - what is it you long for - paint a picture with words.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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We are able to walk outside. Granted some park trails were closed for a bit , but see quite a few people walking about at a safe distance (with masks even if it is a busy area) I'm a quilter and poet so I stay busy. Even a better cook! This poem makes me sad that your spring isn't better. I say we have time to explore hobbies... This poem gives us a sad view of spring... And all the Netflix special series and such (I'm getting addicted to a few!) Hugs to you, whoever you are.
I'd have liked to hear more of what you can't see - take us down memory lane - what was your favorite place to go to in the past - what is it you long for - paint a picture with words.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a good poem, but you do need to correct the word 'being' in the line 'being inside I can't bear.' Simple transposition of letters, so it's really not that big of a deal. I liked reading this, though.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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This is a good poem, but you do need to correct the word 'being' in the line 'being inside I can't bear.' Simple transposition of letters, so it's really not that big of a deal. I liked reading this, though.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! I'm happy that you like it.
