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Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Stinky Bob
by Aiona

Hello, my friend,

Good job with the lune poem. I like short poetry. The presentation is nice too. A fine entry for the Lune Poetry Contest.

 Comment Written 16-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thanks, Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! I don't like the cilantro smell that it exudes when I try to get rid of them. It's other name is Geranium Roberticus and was named for a mischievous fairy.

 Comment Written 16-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    LOL! I'm surprised then it wasn't named "Puck."
reply by lyenochka on 16-May-2020
    Well, it is actually. Puck's full name is Robin (Robert) Goodfellow.
    https://www.trailkeepersoforegon.org/herb-robert-epic-cure-all-or-villain-of-the-piece/
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    OH!!!!!!
Comment from Vanna1
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You followed the criteria well. All the lines go together nicely. It is quite silly and a bit funny. Very descriptive for such little words. Nice picture and colors.

 Comment Written 15-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thanks, Vanna.
Comment from AJ McCall
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As much as they are beautiful, they're called 'skunk flowers' (I think) but they're so pretty. Whoever took this picture is a master photographer.
Great poem!

 Comment Written 15-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Aw, thanks! I took it with my Samsung Galaxy 7 cellphone. It's amazing what quality pictures it takes compared to the old Olympus digital camera I used way back when digital photography was new.
reply by AJ McCall on 17-May-2020
    Cool!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
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This is a poem that tells a little story and makes you imagine funny things. I appreciated the creativity you got out of this poem, so great job with this one.

 Comment Written 15-May-2020


reply by the author on 16-May-2020
    Thanks, Amanda.