The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "I'm a fairy!"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
3 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Peter is really not happy with the whole world. No one cares about him and his bottle is empty. That's probably a real low spot for a drinking leprechaun. And here's the shadow from under the chair making another appearance. Once I start reading I find you too compelling to stop in the middle of a chapter. You're a couple ahead of me. I'll catch up over the next couple of days. Still fun to read you.
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Peter is really not happy with the whole world. No one cares about him and his bottle is empty. That's probably a real low spot for a drinking leprechaun. And here's the shadow from under the chair making another appearance. Once I start reading I find you too compelling to stop in the middle of a chapter. You're a couple ahead of me. I'll catch up over the next couple of days. Still fun to read you.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thanks. Glad you liked it
Comment from Mary Furlong
I confess I haven't a clue as to what this story will turn out to be. But your dialogue is great as is your knowledge of London, I don't know where this is going, but I feel like thumbing a ride.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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I confess I haven't a clue as to what this story will turn out to be. But your dialogue is great as is your knowledge of London, I don't know where this is going, but I feel like thumbing a ride.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thanks. Let's pretend I know where it's going as well. I worked for many years in London, hopefully I'm writing about what I know. Glad you liked it
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
I enjoyed the chapter; I especially liked the vernacular used to show the difference between the fairy and the Englishman. The images created were very real from what one has in mind when thinking of leprechauns. I would think you mean hand in this sentence. (then realiZed his had was empty) giovanni
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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I enjoyed the chapter; I especially liked the vernacular used to show the difference between the fairy and the Englishman. The images created were very real from what one has in mind when thinking of leprechauns. I would think you mean hand in this sentence. (then realiZed his had was empty) giovanni
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Oops, thanks for the spag, and for the review. Glad you enjoyed it
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y/w giovanni
