Grief empathy
Free verse poetry2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very meaningful free verse for this unusual contest -- would that we all had friends such as you!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
to feel the gap --> to fill the gap [??]
Silence become --> Silence becomes
presence_speaks --> presence speaks
I had right --> I had the right [??]
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A very meaningful free verse for this unusual contest -- would that we all had friends such as you!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
to feel the gap --> to fill the gap [??]
Silence become --> Silence becomes
presence_speaks --> presence speaks
I had right --> I had the right [??]
Comment Written 14-May-2020
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I think what your poem does emphasize is how difficult it can be to know what to say to a person when tragedy has struck. I thought this was beautifully written and the writing flowed well. Good luck in the contest!
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I think what your poem does emphasize is how difficult it can be to know what to say to a person when tragedy has struck. I thought this was beautifully written and the writing flowed well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-May-2020
