Matching Tattoos
Horror Story contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from LyndaS
I love body ink so this story really appealed to me. The premise of her tattoos coming to life to protect her I thought was creative and original. The horror is there and palpable. I love when they come to life and circle around her arm on her skin and eventually drip off her fingers to the ground. You did quite a bit within the confines of this contest. A complete story, very descriptive and another evil man meets his fate. Loved the art! Well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I love body ink so this story really appealed to me. The premise of her tattoos coming to life to protect her I thought was creative and original. The horror is there and palpable. I love when they come to life and circle around her arm on her skin and eventually drip off her fingers to the ground. You did quite a bit within the confines of this contest. A complete story, very descriptive and another evil man meets his fate. Loved the art! Well done. Lynda
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Yeah, men are scum. Lol. Thank you for the great review and six, Lynda. It actually took me a good while to find the artwork. I had to stick it in my art program to fix it. I'm pretty sure it's a guy's arm tatt rather than a woman's. Lol. But who cares? I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again for the fat sixie.
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Comment from Georgia Oboh
Amazing short story.
Although I would have titled the story 'Her Tigers' because when we think of tigers, we think of ferocity and aggressiveness. So just by changing a title you create suspense before the story even begins.
Overall it's great, keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Amazing short story.
Although I would have titled the story 'Her Tigers' because when we think of tigers, we think of ferocity and aggressiveness. So just by changing a title you create suspense before the story even begins.
Overall it's great, keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
This was really well thought out and I liked that her would be attacker got what was coming for him. I was intrigued when her tattoos came to life and thought it was quite original. Good luck in the contest!
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This was really well thought out and I liked that her would be attacker got what was coming for him. I was intrigued when her tattoos came to life and thought it was quite original. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Jacob. I'm glad you liked this short piece. Have a great night.
Comment from Bill Schott
This horror story, Matching Tattoos, is well written and brings the killing cats out with a sense of justice and defense. The producing and retracting procedure was compelling and fun to read.
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This horror story, Matching Tattoos, is well written and brings the killing cats out with a sense of justice and defense. The producing and retracting procedure was compelling and fun to read.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, I really appreciate the stars. I'm glad you liked my take on the contest. Have a great night.
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
I think this is an excellent piece. Controlled tension and an interesting 'twist' with the tats.
Something more than having a tiger in your tank (although you might need to be 100 years old to understand that reference).
It made for 'good' reading (I was going to say 'pleasant').
I wish you well in your contest.
cheer
phill
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Hello Anon
I think this is an excellent piece. Controlled tension and an interesting 'twist' with the tats.
Something more than having a tiger in your tank (although you might need to be 100 years old to understand that reference).
It made for 'good' reading (I was going to say 'pleasant').
I wish you well in your contest.
cheer
phill
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Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Hey, Phil hello. Thank you for the fantastic review, friend. I'll admit, tiger in the tank went over my head. I'm getting close but still have a ways before I reach 100. Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.
