Message From The Empty Tomb
Faith will overcome challenges.12 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Faith 5-7-5. You used very good descriptive and true words. Very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very beautiful and well written Faith 5-7-5. You used very good descriptive and true words. Very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-May-2020
Comment from smileycloud
very nice and strong
shows the depth of faith very well indeed
and does take the reader to the resurrection with a great deal of feeling
have a smiley day
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very nice and strong
shows the depth of faith very well indeed
and does take the reader to the resurrection with a great deal of feeling
have a smiley day
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Message From The Empty Tomb
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the
Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good line connection. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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Message From The Empty Tomb
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the
Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good line connection. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this poem of faith that presents the idea of rolling away the stone and stepping out with a resurrected life due to faith in Christ and his power. Bill
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I like this poem of faith that presents the idea of rolling away the stone and stepping out with a resurrected life due to faith in Christ and his power. Bill
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful nugget of Easter-view advice! ;) :) This is an awesome offering for the Faith contest! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
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A wonderful nugget of Easter-view advice! ;) :) This is an awesome offering for the Faith contest! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from BlueTiger
Great work on this poem. I like what you did with the contest and writing prompt, and good choice of artwork to compliment the piece. No errors that I could find.
Best of luck on the contest,
-BT
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Great work on this poem. I like what you did with the contest and writing prompt, and good choice of artwork to compliment the piece. No errors that I could find.
Best of luck on the contest,
-BT
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from Oscar J. Perez
Yes!!!
You don't have a lot to work with with 5-7-5 but you make it work perfectly. Sweetly to the point and empowering. This inspires me to live in God's light and do right all of the time. I loved reading this.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Yes!!!
You don't have a lot to work with with 5-7-5 but you make it work perfectly. Sweetly to the point and empowering. This inspires me to live in God's light and do right all of the time. I loved reading this.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thanks very much for your wonderful review!
Comment from Puzzle
Ooo I liked this short one! You are almost saying that Jesus is in all of us. We should model ourselves after Jesus Christ. You did this in a very creative way and I enjoyed it.
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Ooo I liked this short one! You are almost saying that Jesus is in all of us. We should model ourselves after Jesus Christ. You did this in a very creative way and I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting insight here for the reader with encouragement to 'test' or try out one's Faith - how it can enhance one's life and times - a great pic to illustrate
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Yes an interesting insight here for the reader with encouragement to 'test' or try out one's Faith - how it can enhance one's life and times - a great pic to illustrate
Comment Written 13-May-2020
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed your poem. It's message is clear, it flows well and the message is easy to grasp. It matches the picture perfectly. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
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I enjoyed your poem. It's message is clear, it flows well and the message is easy to grasp. It matches the picture perfectly. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 13-May-2020
