Jesus Returns
a contest entry27 total reviews
Comment from alexwriter
I came upon this tale on FanStory , and I was really engrossed throughout. I had the impression that I knew the characters well because of how well-developed they were and the author's talent for narrative. I was kept on the edge of my seat by the intriguing narrative. The author's attention to detail and vivid descriptions helped to make the narrative come to life, and I liked that. Overall, this piece of literature left me awestruck, and I heartily suggest it to everyone who enjoys a good tale. I'm forward to read more in the future from this wonderful author!
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I came upon this tale on FanStory , and I was really engrossed throughout. I had the impression that I knew the characters well because of how well-developed they were and the author's talent for narrative. I was kept on the edge of my seat by the intriguing narrative. The author's attention to detail and vivid descriptions helped to make the narrative come to life, and I liked that. Overall, this piece of literature left me awestruck, and I heartily suggest it to everyone who enjoys a good tale. I'm forward to read more in the future from this wonderful author!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-May-2023
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, Portia, this is a very impressive little poem. I'm not quite sure how I feel about the idea (the context) but I know that "be watchful and pray" is marvelous advice... Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Wow, Portia, this is a very impressive little poem. I'm not quite sure how I feel about the idea (the context) but I know that "be watchful and pray" is marvelous advice... Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Dawn,
Thank you so much for your review, six star rating, very kind comments and best wishes. Stay safe and have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from richie b
Pharp,
Your poem excites me! The return of Jesus Christ
has no rival story or contest.
Your words bring spiritual imagery that the earth
has never experienced. Your choice of artwork and
beautiful words are awe inspiring!
Peace and Blessings,
Richie b
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Pharp,
Your poem excites me! The return of Jesus Christ
has no rival story or contest.
Your words bring spiritual imagery that the earth
has never experienced. Your choice of artwork and
beautiful words are awe inspiring!
Peace and Blessings,
Richie b
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Richie,
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...Portia
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Portia,
Enjoy the day,
You are Blessed!
Richie
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Jesus Returns
by pharp
Hello, my friend,
A fine entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. I really like the presentation. Good syllable count. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Jesus Returns
by pharp
Hello, my friend,
A fine entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. I really like the presentation. Good syllable count. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Hello Sweet Gypsy,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Wish I had six stars, but used them all, This is very well written. It is very meaningful, Jesus' return described in three lines. The picture is
an excellent choice. It gave me goosebumps.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Wish I had six stars, but used them all, This is very well written. It is very meaningful, Jesus' return described in three lines. The picture is
an excellent choice. It gave me goosebumps.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Willie,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day,
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Susan Larson
You get my last six! This is outstanding. I am impressed and appreciative of all the biblical research you do for your spiritual poetry. People write about their "muse" and how it inspires them. I think it's obvious who your "Muse" is.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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You get my last six! This is outstanding. I am impressed and appreciative of all the biblical research you do for your spiritual poetry. People write about their "muse" and how it inspires them. I think it's obvious who your "Muse" is.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Susan,
Thanks so much for your review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day. Susan, your comments placed a poem in my spirit. I will work on it today. Stay safe and well...
Hugs...Portia
Comment from Iza Deleanu
riding a white horse
Jesus returns in Glory ~
be watchful and pray.
Quite unexpected but very truthful and it seems that that time is near. Thank you fir sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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riding a white horse
Jesus returns in Glory ~
be watchful and pray.
Quite unexpected but very truthful and it seems that that time is near. Thank you fir sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
Iza,
Thank you kindly for your review , very kind comments and best wishes. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
If you know your Bible, this would make sense, but you also helped by including the info in your notes. I think you did well with this poem. It fits the prompts also.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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If you know your Bible, this would make sense, but you also helped by including the info in your notes. I think you did well with this poem. It fits the prompts also.
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Amanda,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a chance of winning the contest! It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a chance of winning the contest! It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Raul,
Thank you kindly for your review , very kind comments and best wishes. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
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You're welcome and thanks!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
To see Jesus come riding on a white horse through Heaven's gates would be wonderful. I can't see it happening in my time, but He will come, He has told us so. Your 5-7-5 poem is well written and conveys a wonderful message. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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To see Jesus come riding on a white horse through Heaven's gates would be wonderful. I can't see it happening in my time, but He will come, He has told us so. Your 5-7-5 poem is well written and conveys a wonderful message. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 15-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Sandra,
Thank you kindly for your review , very kind comments and best wishes. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia