Seeing Is Not Believing
Things are not always what we see, hence the need for faith!2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful offering, but your pic is just a solid black rectangle... however, I realize that MAY have been intentional given the first line of your poem, but I thought I'd mention it just in case... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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A beautiful offering, but your pic is just a solid black rectangle... however, I realize that MAY have been intentional given the first line of your poem, but I thought I'd mention it just in case... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thanks so much for the review. It is the image I intended, so hopefully most will realize that. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
All the elements are here. The photo is perfect for the point the author is making. Perhaps the comma could be removed from Line 2 to make Lines 1 and 2 flow together as one thought. Description line on top seems weak. Gleaming in darkness doesn't seem supported by Hebrews 11:1.
Thank you for the opportunity to review your work.
Carry on!
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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All the elements are here. The photo is perfect for the point the author is making. Perhaps the comma could be removed from Line 2 to make Lines 1 and 2 flow together as one thought. Description line on top seems weak. Gleaming in darkness doesn't seem supported by Hebrews 11:1.
Thank you for the opportunity to review your work.
Carry on!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thanks for your review. I will take your observations under advisement.
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Thanks for your review. I will take your observations under advisement.
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Cheers!
