My Beating Heart
A Faith 5-7-5 contest poem...6 total reviews
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
This is a BEAUTIFUL poem!!!!!!
I really enjoyed reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!
And congratulations for the win!!!!!!! Also, the picture is beautiful!!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar :) xoxoxoxoxo
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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This is a BEAUTIFUL poem!!!!!!
I really enjoyed reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!
And congratulations for the win!!!!!!! Also, the picture is beautiful!!!!
-Tanvi Pauddar :) xoxoxoxoxo
Comment Written 29-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thanks, appreciate you liked it!! :) xoxoxox
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You're welcome!! :) xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
Am deeply one more I missed! Agh! You're quickly becoming the Queen of the Short Verse and this one is no exception. I loved this one, too. Cool beating heart! You'll have to tell me how you do that. I haven't figured it out yet. FanStory edit is still a mystery to me. LOL! A ache for a truckload of sixes for you. :( Please k ow, you delight me so. I think everything is six worthy, dear poetress. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxoxoxoxoxo!!!!
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Am deeply one more I missed! Agh! You're quickly becoming the Queen of the Short Verse and this one is no exception. I loved this one, too. Cool beating heart! You'll have to tell me how you do that. I haven't figured it out yet. FanStory edit is still a mystery to me. LOL! A ache for a truckload of sixes for you. :( Please k ow, you delight me so. I think everything is six worthy, dear poetress. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxoxoxoxoxo!!!!
Comment Written 20-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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You stop all that fuss over stars! You are my greatest supporter and thoughts from the stroke of your pen are the greatest honor by far! xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from smileycloud
lovely presentation of the poem
I made the mistake of hesitating afyter the word for at the end of the second line but once I read it out loud correctly the way the writer intended...it flowed beautifully and is a great reminder of the depth of the writers faith and of the Lord's residence in our life
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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lovely presentation of the poem
I made the mistake of hesitating afyter the word for at the end of the second line but once I read it out loud correctly the way the writer intended...it flowed beautifully and is a great reminder of the depth of the writers faith and of the Lord's residence in our life
have a smiley day
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you so much! That can be one of the difficulties with poetry. There are so many styles and they can flow so differently one from another! Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yet it is up to us to keep it alive... ;) :) This is an awesome offering for the Faith contest! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Yet it is up to us to keep it alive... ;) :) This is an awesome offering for the Faith contest! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Awe! Thanks a whole bunches! xoxoxo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem of faith tells confidently that your beating heart is there where God's love is written for all eternity; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This poem of faith tells confidently that your beating heart is there where God's love is written for all eternity; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you very much! Appreciate you enjoyed! :)
Comment from Enzo Lance
I love the message this poem is trying to convey to the reader. As I read, your whole 575 poem, all words formed together will actually stand just fragment and not sentence, but still the meaning is there. I know Haiku poems don't have specific rules on sentence construction within limited counts of syllable, for me it would be better, if it will stand as a whole sentence when combined. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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I love the message this poem is trying to convey to the reader. As I read, your whole 575 poem, all words formed together will actually stand just fragment and not sentence, but still the meaning is there. I know Haiku poems don't have specific rules on sentence construction within limited counts of syllable, for me it would be better, if it will stand as a whole sentence when combined. Good job.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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:) thanks so much! I understand and have corrected this. appreciate you took time to check it out!
