Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 78 "The Real Takers?"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I loved this, but I would suggest you not use Who's for the first word. It should be 'Who are,' but that would be too many syllables. How about 'Meet?'
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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I loved this, but I would suggest you not use Who's for the first word. It should be 'Who are,' but that would be too many syllables. How about 'Meet?'
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you for the Review, Rating and Suggestion I Appreciate it.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
All the elements here. Picture and text match perfectly. Relevant current topic. Nothing to change.
Thank you for the opportunity to review your art.
Well done!
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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All the elements here. Picture and text match perfectly. Relevant current topic. Nothing to change.
Thank you for the opportunity to review your art.
Well done!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you for the Review, Rating and Valued time to read it.
Blessings
