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Faith 5-7-5 poem

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Comment from smileycloud
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nice faithful words and strong message as a child of God
yes
He has promised that all is well and always be well with our souls
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 13-May-2020


reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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It is a wonderful confidence, yes? ;) :) This is an awesome offering for the Faith contest! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 13-May-2020


reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from joycetreasures
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Hello,
I pray you and your family are well. I also believe and trust in Jesus and we should stay steadfast in our faith. I like your imagery of words of the truth in our Savior. Also, I like your seventeen syllables acrostic poem, as well as the imagery you used. Well-done. Thank you for sharing your faith. Keep writing because you do it so well. No errors.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Okay. You have made my day, my friend! Blessings to you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
reply by joycetreasures on 12-May-2020
    I did. Stay safe.
Comment from Enzo Lance
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This poem complies with the requirements of of 575 Haiku poem. It gives us reader inspiration to have faith in God. I would like to give suggestion to change the last part because when I read it back again, the thought of the poem ends already on the second line , making the last line a fragment . I know they are connected, however second line seems to be ended already. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you! I didn't know that. I will see what I can do. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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A 5-7-5 poem about Faith. Well, it is clear that yours is about faith, and a 5-7-5 also. I only want to agree with you. I have faith in God. Therefore we can await future serenely and calm. All will be well again because it is God who rules our lives, not the Covid-virus.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! It is awesome that you're thinking positive. :)
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 13-May-2020
    Welcome!
Comment from QC Poet
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Amen. I Also Believe Faith in God's Word changes everything.
Thank you for Sharing your poetic Gift and Good Luck in the Faith 5-7-5 contest. Blessings and Prayers.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!