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Climbing Every Mountain

mountains as a metaphor for struggles

7 total reviews 
Comment from Vanna1
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Nicely worded and to the point. Uplifting message. Followed all the criteria well. Good choice of image. Appropriate metaphor to convey your message. I like it.

 Comment Written 13-May-2020


reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Comment from smileycloud
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lovely poem and nice presentation and meets the requirements of the prompt very well indeed
Thanks be to the Lord for guiding you up those mountains and carrying you over them
blessings
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 13-May-2020


reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Yes, Praise be to God, I never would have made it without him. I thank you ever so much for your review and I really appreciate your comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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One day at a time, one mountain at a time... ;) :) This is an awesome offering for the Faith contest! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 13-May-2020


reply by the author on 13-May-2020
    Thank you ever so much for your review. I truly respect your comments and appreciate your well wishes.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
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This is really nice. It had a very positive message and fit in with your syllable count. Very good job with this, and hopefully you will win the contest.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate your comments. Yes, it would be nice to win the contest though from the ones that I've read I'm not sure that I will even place in the top three.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Excellent, meaningful poem about the power of faith in Jesus Christ. Thank you for sharing this great message of encouragement, at a time when many people need encouragement, including me -- not just because of Coronavirus, but the usual human struggles and spiritual warfare.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thanks ever so much for your review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 13-May-2020
    You're welcome. And thank you for your gracious response. - Mary Kay
Comment from papa55mike
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The road to faith is a mountainous journey through many valleys. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you for your review. I truly appreciate your comments. May God bless you and yours.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the
effective use of one
continuous thought.
-I like the use of
climbing mountains
as a metaphor for
the steps we take in life.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-May-2020


reply by the author on 12-May-2020
    Thank you for your review. I truly appreciate your comments.
reply by Pam (respa) on 12-May-2020
    You are very welcome.